jack c. Posted February 11, 2022 Share Posted February 11, 2022 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hidden Symmetry Posted February 11, 2022 Share Posted February 11, 2022 Nice groove & feel to this, fits the subject matter nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 12, 2022 Share Posted February 12, 2022 This is a bit of a different side of your songwriting - I enjoyed it - well done. Mix sounds fine to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted February 12, 2022 Share Posted February 12, 2022 Like this, sounds good - and your mixes are getting so much better Cool Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 12, 2022 Author Share Posted February 12, 2022 22 hours ago, Hidden Symmetry said: Nice groove & feel to this, fits the subject matter nicely. 17 minutes ago, Bajan Blue said: Like this, sounds good - and your mixes are getting so much better thank you for your thoughts.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 12, 2022 Author Share Posted February 12, 2022 4 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said: this is a bit of a different side of your songwriting i have endless styles for me music.thanks.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted February 12, 2022 Share Posted February 12, 2022 Your mixes are improving for sure, well done here. Love the chord choices, the guitar tone as well, and the vocal delivery (particularly in the first half where instrumentation is sparser) really has impact. A mix thing to try would be eq'ing away all of the bass guitar above 500hz or so, it sounds like something in the upper mids or mids is masking a bit of vocal? Worth a try perhaps. You also seem to have a buzz in your vocal mic, but weirdly the buzz is louder (much) when you are not singing. Louder buzz in the vocal gaps. Totally worth getting rid of that, wherever it's coming from. A skosh of reverb on the vocal (to match the guitar's space a bit) would be interesting as well. But, super creative chord changes, all good, and I couldn't ever predict what was coming next. Very good! cheers, -Tom 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted February 12, 2022 Share Posted February 12, 2022 Great chord changes. Accompanying instrument is very good. Voc sounds bit thin to me. Maybe try doubling the voc track? Your lyrics are always good, this one especially so. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 13, 2022 Author Share Posted February 13, 2022 19 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said: You also seem to have a buzz in your vocal i used some saturation on me vocal.thanks for thoughts.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted February 14, 2022 Share Posted February 14, 2022 Hi Jack, Love the lyrics and tune very beatle-esque to my mind. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! best wishes paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted February 14, 2022 Share Posted February 14, 2022 the first time I listened I didn't get it....the second time i did....great music to underscore the anguish in the message communicated in your lyrics....direct, short and to the point....mixes are sounding better, chords are perfect 🎶🎤🎸🔊 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 14, 2022 Author Share Posted February 14, 2022 3 hours ago, thegaltieribrothers said: Love the lyrics and tune very beatle-esque to my mind. 1 hour ago, Larry T. said: great music to underscore the anguish in the message communicated in your lyrics thanks mates for listen/comments.larry each song i do i try to fit music to words.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted February 15, 2022 Share Posted February 15, 2022 👍's t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 15, 2022 Author Share Posted February 15, 2022 1 hour ago, DeeringAmps said: 👍's thanks tom.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted February 17, 2022 Share Posted February 17, 2022 The lyrics suited the music well! Agree with the sentiments of your lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 17, 2022 Author Share Posted February 17, 2022 8 hours ago, David Sprouse said: The lyrics suited the music well! Agree with the sentiments of your lyrics. thanks mate:jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted February 18, 2022 Share Posted February 18, 2022 Jack , Great job on the guitars and overall mix. Really Nice! mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 18, 2022 Author Share Posted February 18, 2022 2 hours ago, mark skinner said: jack , Great job on the guitars and overall mix. Really Nice! mark thanks so much mark:jack c.and those are vst plugins!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimbo 88 Posted February 18, 2022 Share Posted February 18, 2022 Very cool...everything you do seems to be getting better. Vocals, guitars, mixing...all better. It is fun to check in your songs. This song is inspirational. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 19, 2022 Author Share Posted February 19, 2022 On 2/18/2022 at 1:14 PM, Jimbo 88 said: It is fun to check in your songs. thanks mate.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Please sign in to comment
You will be able to leave a comment after signing in
Sign In Now