Thanks for the listen and commenting.
Glad you like the hook, I'll try the tempo change next time.
Thanks for listening and for the kick drum and percussion ideas, Bjorn also mention the kick drum so I'll have a look at that then as well.
No we are not really brothers the name 'the Galtieri Brothers' is just a stage name and sounds exotic and controversial when you come from Birmingham UK. We wanted to shock with our name and awe with our songs but mostly our efforts seem to block and bore 😉 By the way it's just me now as my 'brother' has gone on to better things.
Thank you all for taking the time to listen and comment it is really appreciated.