Your lyrics are a creative take on a common theme. Timing issues aren't that bad. I think you might want to switch up the verses a little, a little break here and there would help. sorry for trying to change you. :D:D
I was picturing huge clouds of pot wafting over your workstation whilst the synth played in the background. There's something about those early movies (e.g. reefer madness) that are so weird now. This is really well done, bjorn.