Lynn Wilson

"The only thing that stands out to me is that your song is mastered plenty loud, but at the expense of a wider dynamic range, which would allow the song to "breathe" from a greater variation in volume levels throughout the song." please explain how to do this.i don't play the loudness game Actually, you do play the loudness game when your song is the same volume from beginning to end. Not every instrument or vocal line has to be maxed out. Variation in volume levels from section to section help the song to breathe and lessens listener fatigue. This can be done by dropping an instrument in certain places, and/or not singing at full volume all the way through. There's much literature on this that's widely available under the heading "dynamics". Hope this helps.

Jack, this is one of the coolest songs I've heard lately. Your arrangement is clever and your performances are terrific. I can almost understand most of the words, but no matter, I like the style. The only thing that stands out to me is that your song is mastered plenty loud, but at the expense of a wider dynamic range, which would allow the song to "breathe" from a greater variation in volume levels throughout the song. That may be nitpicking too much, however, as you have a style, and I like it.

Wow, where have I been? This is mesmerizing and one of my favorites. It should be on your greatest hits album!

Rex, your versatility is amazing. It will pay off for you in the long run. I could hear this being played in clubs, should they ever reopen. I love experimenting with electronics, too, but I'm not as fresh as you are. Keep experimenting, but don't quit writing songs like "Eternity", which is one of the loveliest songs I've heard in a while.

I'm a little late to this party, but I'm glad I made it! It seems like you're more polished but raw at the same time. I like this song as much as any you've posted, and I can hear the confidence in your performance quite easily. You really know how to make the most of your equipment, and you've helped change my direction from time to time. Kudos!

Another sterling song from this album! I like everything about this production. I find it to be very inspirational, so excuse me if I ever attempt something like this;)

As always, brilliant! There is so much depth in this that one has to listen several times to take it all in. You keep setting the bar higher and higher each time you try something new. Carry on

John, I caught this song the other day but didn't have time to comment. I think it's a terrific song and showcases your increasing professionalism. Please put it back up! Don't let one person's opinion discourage you.

Kevin! I just listened to this twice, and I'm ready to jump back in. To me, the arrangement is the star on this tune, which makes it sound very fresh. Your vocal work has what I look for- texture and feel. Take a bow!

First class all the way! Your voice is killer and reminds me somewhat of Seal. The video is superb, as well. Keep it up!

This is one song that does not need to be dressed up. Very cool, Jesse!

Good song, good vocal, and good mix! You've come a long way, John. This deserves a large audience.

Outstanding! It made me smile the entire time. Best of luck to you guys!

This is exquisite! More, please!

Wow! I just listened to your other song mixed on this system and was impressed enough to check out this software that you're using. Unfortunately, they don't yet have my Sennheiser HD 300's on their list, so I'll send a request for them. This song sounds great on my speakers, so you're successful in making translatable mixes on your cans. Congrats!