I'm trying to wrap my head around you artistically jack. This is interesting, especially the breakdown section.
Again, hoping you're taking some "artistic" license with the lyrics and not being completely autobiographical.
That aside, I think you've captured the tracks better, I'm not hearing what I call "digititus" (digital overs distortion).
Mix seems "cleaner" overall.
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if I may, you're delivering a lot of lyrics here and to my ear it gets in the way of the meter.
Now its your song, your production; sometimes finding a way to convey the message with fewer
syllables goes a long way to make it flow melodically (though if that gets in the way of your story...).
Just my nickel98's worth, so take it with a grain of salt!