ABull 94 Posted October 19, 2019 (edited) Cheers... Edited November 26, 2019 by ABull 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 238 Posted October 19, 2019 Great production with lots of nice harmonies. It all goes together nicely. The words are uplifting and delightful. 🙂John B. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amiller 186 Posted October 20, 2019 Nice toe tapper. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 884 Posted October 20, 2019 Well sung, excellent job on the harmonies, vocally and note selection. I might let the acoustic push a bit more, maybe spread it across the sound stage or bring up the verb on it on the right side? Just some things I would try if I was mixing it. Overall a big👍 Tom 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 400 Posted October 20, 2019 What a nice happy, cheerful song. A great melody and lyrics carry it right along. Your vocals are excellent as are the harmonies. Mix sounds good to me. Nice one!!! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noynekker 166 Posted October 21, 2019 (edited) Hello ABull . . . it's positively positive ! I really especially like the intro acoustic guitar, it sets up the tone of what is to come. The vocals are very upfront in the mix, and this works very well for my ears. My minor niggle would be in the middle section (which I really like) the "Happy to be Me" vocal kind of gets lost when the instruments come back in, and I think it's an important point in the song which should be heard more. Anyways, great stuff, and I also like the unpredictable way you end this. Edited October 21, 2019 by noynekker 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted October 22, 2019 On 10/19/2019 at 3:48 PM, Johnbee58 said: Great production with lots of nice harmonies. It all goes together nicely. The words are uplifting and delightful. 🙂John B. John, thanks for listening and commenting -- I'm glad you appreciate it -- esp. the vocals~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starise 874 Posted October 22, 2019 This has a nice retro feel I don't often hear. I feel like I'm back in 1973 11 years old and listening to a tune on the radio. I hope you understand that this is a high compliment from me on this because I really like that stuff!!! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted October 24, 2019 On 10/20/2019 at 7:30 AM, DeeringAmps said: Well sung, excellent job on the harmonies, vocally and note selection. I might let the acoustic push a bit more, maybe spread it across the sound stage or bring up the verb on it on the right side? Just some things I would try if I was mixing it. Overall a big👍 Tom Hey Tom, glad you like the song -- esp. the vocals. Thanks for listening and commenting mate,. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted October 25, 2019 On 10/20/2019 at 2:09 PM, freddy j said: What a nice happy, cheerful song. A great melody and lyrics carry it right along. Your vocals are excellent as are the harmonies. Mix sounds good to me. Nice one!!! Hey Freddy, thanks for listening and commenting me ol' mucker -- glad ya like the song esp. dem vox. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 549 Posted October 25, 2019 I liked your lead vocal on this one - especially the echo you put on it. Cool tune - it hooked me in for the listen. I thought the bass could come up a bit more in the mix. Overall, excellent job - thanks for posting. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
garybrun 618 Posted October 25, 2019 Hi Allan. (going through a lot of songs now Im back on line as promised) Are you influenced by the Beatles? liked the arrangement and vocal harmonies. I can hear that you don't use auto tune... not meant in a bad way. Its very retro and 60's sounding. Mix wise (again just my opinions) its very middle based. I would like to hear more tone and separation. Your composition skills are amazing. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted October 27, 2019 On 10/20/2019 at 9:00 PM, noynekker said: Hello ABull . . . it's positively positive ! I really especially like the intro acoustic guitar, it sets up the tone of what is to come. The vocals are very upfront in the mix, and this works very well for my ears. My minor niggle would be in the middle section (which I really like) the "Happy to be Me" vocal kind of gets lost when the instruments come back in, and I think it's an important point in the song which should be heard more. Anyways, great stuff, and I also like the unpredictable way you end this. Hey, thanks for listening -- I'll keep your comments re the mix in mind--glad ya like the song & the demo. ~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted October 30, 2019 On 10/22/2019 at 1:41 PM, Starise said: This has a nice retro feel I don't often hear. I feel like I'm back in 1973 11 years old and listening to a tune on the radio. I hope you understand that this is a high compliment from me on this because I really like that stuff!!! Hey mate, thanks for that complimentary comment and thanks for listening~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted November 1, 2019 On 10/25/2019 at 3:41 PM, Douglas Kirby said: I liked your lead vocal on this one - especially the echo you put on it. Cool tune - it hooked me in for the listen. I thought the bass could come up a bit more in the mix. Overall, excellent job - thanks for posting. Hey Douglas, thanks for listening and commenting -- I'll take a listen to dat bass level~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted November 3, 2019 On 10/25/2019 at 5:51 PM, garybrun said: Hi Allan. (going through a lot of songs now Im back on line as promised) Are you influenced by the Beatles? liked the arrangement and vocal harmonies. I can hear that you don't use auto tune... not meant in a bad way. Its very retro and 60's sounding. Mix wise (again just my opinions) its very middle based. I would like to hear more tone and separation. Your composition skills are amazing. Gary, thanks for listening and commenting -- glad ya dig my little demo~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ramscapri 16 Posted November 5, 2019 Nice start there Allan with that reverby lead. Beats and vocals gel in well. Good one overall 👍 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted November 6, 2019 Hi Allan, A nice cheerful happy song matching nicely the sunshine coming through my window whilst listening. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted November 8, 2019 On 10/19/2019 at 8:33 PM, amiller said: Nice toe tapper. Glad to get that toe tapping mate! -- thanks for listening~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 94 Posted November 10, 2019 On 11/5/2019 at 12:14 PM, ramscapri said: Nice start there Allan with that reverby lead. Beats and vocals gel in well. Good one overall 👍 Hey mate, thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
