Hey, this sounds very well put together -- the mix is good as are the performances. Only nit is that to me it sounds a bit too bright and the mix could use a bit of breathing room -- good work -- Allan.
Hey mates, here's my demo of one of my new songs Beneath The Southern Sky...
BENEATH THE SOUTHERN SKY -- written (music & lyrics) & performed (vocals, electric & acoustic guitars, bass guitar, keyboards, percussion editing etc.) by me – home studio.
Hey Paul -- very nice -- esp. when it gets to the doo-wahs and the bridge -- some clever chord changes there. It does seem that the song really gets going from the bridge on -- maybe try to connect the verses before that better music-wise? The mix and arrangement are pleasing as are the vocals. Catchy song - - Allan.
Hey Freddy, this is a different type of song from you, I think (haven't heard them all) -- the recording needs some work (eq and stereo separation come to mind) but the demo gets the song across as demos are usually want to do, right? I like the melody on this and the guitars are good -- your vocal sounds a bit different too -- I like it! :) Allan.
I don't hear 'epic' but it was well recorded and arranged. The choir sounds don't do the piece any favors -- perhaps you could use them sparingly and not bring them in so soon. It's good to challenge yourself and I wish you well in your work -- Allan.