Lot of really cool stuff going on. I really liked it.
Maybe it's intentional , but there is something about the timing between the synth and the percussion that from around 0:14 to 0:30 that seems off to me, almost like they are playing at slightly different tempos.
jeff
I enjoyed that. I never saw this particular episode, but looked it up and found that Rod Serling considered this his favorite episode from the first season. I'll have to check it out.
jeff
I agree, this has potential. It's got a good drive to it, and the synth sounds you selected.
You've got a good base, so I'm sure if you keep at it you will find a tune that you feel better about to go with it.
jeff
The energy in this is amazing. There are some places, like around 1:55, where I would have liked to have heard the lead synth a little better, but that's just a nit. Outstanding production!