Asato Maa Posted July 7, 2023 Share Posted July 7, 2023 I have been immersed in the creative process for a long time, working on a new composition in a new for me style of Lounge, Lo-fi & Chillout. This track is a unique combination of soft vinyl sound, cozy piano, bass guitar and percussion instruments that add rhythm and dynamics to the music. Each instrument was carefully selected and tuned to create a harmonious and heartfelt sound. I put a lot of time and energy into this composition. I spent months reworking the tune numerous times, listening to it on different audio systems and headphones to achieve the perfect balance and accentuation of each instrument. Every note, every chord, and every rhythm in this composition was designed with special attention to detail. I strived to create an atmosphere in which you can relax, enjoy pleasant melodies, and take a break from the hustle and bustle of everyday life. I am now ready to share this song with you ❤ ❤ Please listen to it and enjoy the music, which is designed to create peace and immersion in your thoughts. I always appreciate your opinion and feedback. Please share your impressions of the track in the comments. Your feedback will help me improve and grow in my writing. Thank you for sticking with me and sharing this musical journey. I hope this composition gives you moments of peace and inspiration. I can't wait to hear what you think of the composition and cover 😋 Your comments will help me better understand how my music affects my listeners and inspire me to keep creating ❤ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted July 8, 2023 Share Posted July 8, 2023 wonderful sounds.needs a voice or synth to play some melodies.jack 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted July 9, 2023 Share Posted July 9, 2023 I couldn't listen to this - on Soundcloud it said this track is not available in South Africa?? Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted July 9, 2023 Share Posted July 9, 2023 I liked it, very wooooshy, and some great panning in your mix! Lots going on but the elements don't get lost in each other. Drums are pretty minimal, almost as if they are suggesting the beat rather than stating it. It's a mixing choice, sounds good but I found myself wanting a "drums up" section. The kick is of course the most present element, but maybe getting the snare/hi hats more prominent, at least in parts, could be an idea to add dynamics to the piece. A stellar mix that certainly fits the chill zone. Nice job! cheers, -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted July 10, 2023 Share Posted July 10, 2023 Gives me a peaceful and relaxed feeling. Like Jack mentioned it could use something more melodic on top. Dialing up the reverb a little (or a lot) would ramp up the cosmic component, as would a bit of delay effects. Nice job on this. -=Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted July 10, 2023 Share Posted July 10, 2023 I think I get it but as noted it needs some additional ear candy to keep ones attention, I got distracted sorry. The mix sounds good here but.... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asato Maa Posted July 11, 2023 Author Share Posted July 11, 2023 On 7/8/2023 at 9:51 PM, jack c. said: wonderful sounds.needs a voice or synth to play some melodies.jack Good idea! Thank you for the listening! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted July 12, 2023 Share Posted July 12, 2023 Mix is fine..We all paint different pictures... its a little monotonous for me. Needs more to keep ones attention. Well done. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asato Maa Posted July 12, 2023 Author Share Posted July 12, 2023 (edited) On 7/9/2023 at 2:54 PM, Bajan Blue said: I couldn't listen to this - on Soundcloud it said this track is not available in South Africa?? Nigel Hi! Very interesting... track should be available in South Africa! Maybe something happened with the Soundcloud's settings? You can listen my tracks on spotify, apple, amazon etc - if you use it 🙌 Edited July 13, 2023 by Asato Maa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted July 13, 2023 Share Posted July 13, 2023 The attention to detail on note choice, rhythm, and composition in general paid off. It shows. It's an excellent soundscape. Jeff 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asato Maa Posted July 13, 2023 Author Share Posted July 13, 2023 On 7/9/2023 at 10:16 PM, PhonoBrainer said: I liked it, very wooooshy, and some great panning in your mix! Lots going on but the elements don't get lost in each other. Drums are pretty minimal, almost as if they are suggesting the beat rather than stating it. It's a mixing choice, sounds good but I found myself wanting a "drums up" section. The kick is of course the most present element, but maybe getting the snare/hi hats more prominent, at least in parts, could be an idea to add dynamics to the piece. A stellar mix that certainly fits the chill zone. Nice job! cheers, -Tom Wow, how well you described everything, Tom! Interesting drum idea, thanks a lot!! It seems to me that I went too far with the kick (( It seems that while working on the track, after mixing and production, the sound of the tracks is completely different ((( The idea of making the snare/hi-hats more visible is very cool, I appreciate it!Thanks again for your attention to my music, Tom! Wish you all the best! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asato Maa Posted July 17, 2023 Author Share Posted July 17, 2023 On 7/10/2023 at 12:14 PM, bjornpdx said: Gives me a peaceful and relaxed feeling. Like Jack mentioned it could use something more melodic on top. Dialing up the reverb a little (or a lot) would ramp up the cosmic component, as would a bit of delay effects. Nice job on this. -=Bjorn Hello, Bjorn! It's a good idea about something more melodic on top! Thank you for the comment and listening! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asato Maa Posted July 29, 2023 Author Share Posted July 29, 2023 On 7/13/2023 at 9:45 AM, jwnicholson78 said: The attention to detail on note choice, rhythm, and composition in general paid off. It shows. It's an excellent soundscape. Jeff Jeff, thank you or the listening and feedback! I try to make this track with crystal sound 🙌 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asato Maa Posted July 29, 2023 Author Share Posted July 29, 2023 (edited) On 7/10/2023 at 6:27 PM, Wookiee said: I think I get it but as noted it needs some additional ear candy to keep ones attention, I got distracted sorry. The mix sounds good here but.... Buy what? )) Sorry, I don't understand what do you mean? Edited July 29, 2023 by Asato Maa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted July 29, 2023 Share Posted July 29, 2023 35 minutes ago, Asato Maa said: Buy what? )) Sorry, I don't understand what do you mean? As I said I got distracted, a polite way of saying not enough change to keep my furry ears engaged. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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