jack c.

beautiful.tad more hi's on arpeggios'.jack c.melody needs to be a tad higher.

very nice and tender.jack c.

lovely nice job.jack c.a few less bass notes and bring up it's volume.1st verse or so try less instruments then bring in other instruments.

great music for science fiction.jack c.

killer drums!!!!!!!!!!!!!!how about some verb/delay on voice,maybe some saturation.these fatten up voice.wonderful song.jack c.

nice chords changes!!!!!!!!!!!!and strange rhythm feel.it might need a touch of quantize.jack c.

thanks mark.jack c.

thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

love those squeaks and song outstanding job.jack c.

boy you guys are gonna get me mind right soon.thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

i'd like to hear some low synth strings to fill out song body.i like it.jack c.

tad more highs on piano.try and add a few more diverse parts.jack c.

nice job ye haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.jack c.

first part of song sounds a bit like a swing shuffle feel to a straight feel.maybe bass or lead guitar.after that just fine .jack c.

at first i thought you were a jazz guy.man you are a rocker.in this song lower piano lead some.jack c.

everything is blaring at one level (& there's distortion) maybe you're going for a lo-fi sound? i want to make me stuff better. monochromatic w/o dynamics. what is this? all tracks were recorded at 10 6 db so how could they be distorted.some parts of said song only had a few instruments how could they not have dynamics.lufs was --6 and limiter was 5.0 and ceiling was 0.0.i don't want lofi.jack c.

if ya would please explain what ya hear as it is mixed and mastered. monochromatic w/o dynamics. what does this mean?jack c.

beautiful brasilian type song.add more bottom to lead guitar.tighten drum rolls a tad.jack c.

more music for this song.jack c.

if rod stewart,stevie nicks,captain beefheart sing you can sing.jack c.

don't be concerned about those short people,make songs even longer.beautiful song.jack c. nice job to all.jack c.

ya got all these people looking at this page and don't listen.what's up with that?great all around job.jack c.put in a voice with words.