jack c.

the first part guitar chords needs some warmth to it.little harsh sounds.also eq the entire mix little less highs.maybe some percussion here and there.jack c.

sounds over all mix has too much bottom.nice harmony.jack c.

soundsreal good.jack c.

needs to be longer.jack c.

first listen to your monitors.bass guitar a tad lower.great job.jack c.it's fine without guitar.nice harmony.

lead guitar needs some bottom taken off and a tad more highs.bring up kick drum.fine work.jack c.

sounds real good.jack c.

man rock on out.jackc.

thanks mate.jack c.

boy what a wonderful statement!!!!!thank you.jack c. couldn't understand all the lyrics easily. suggestions what i may do about this??????????????

beautiful make it longer.jack c.

thanks mate.jack c.

monster metal.right on.jack c.

spooky killer chords.welldone.jack c.

enjoyable.jack c.

some nice tones but song needs to be at least 15 minutes,plus ya need more time changes.kiddin jack c.what guitar vst plugin amp sims are ya using?

bring down kick/bass sounds nice.jack c.

fine all around sounds/recording.jack c.

thanks mate:jack c.

sounds good to me ears.jack c.depeche mode meets ultravox

ya made with laugh with comments.thanks.jack c.i toured enough playing in band some 25 years.

hey mate:thanks for thoughts.a number of people say bowie which i can't hear.i played in a black band for years hence me funk along with the "sons of champlin" major influence on me.yeap i'm an ole man also going on 16.keep comments coming so i may grow!!!!!jack c. thanks mate:i put me voice through antarees harmonizer for the high voice.thanks for listen/comments.jack c.

sounds like a uk type song.nicely done.jack c.on the bass synth add some more bottom or sub syn.