Paul Bush

Hi this one flew under the radar , another good song from you, really liked the percussion , cant fault it in any way good stuff cheers P

Oh yes Liked this very much great melody , wasnt too keen on the fill guitar percussion did the trick , great vocals top song ...

Hi Tim, yes there are certanly a few phrases that woukld work better if the played the same melody lots in there to choose from lots of potential

Great acoustic guitar tone , i never achieve that , it all pops out at you , yeah i liked this very nuch cheers

Hi whoisp Yes it just got better and better as the song continued, really kept the listener interested , like a good cold beer right to the very last drop , really liked the vocals , yep great stuff this one cheers

sounded fun to me loved all the instuments ,

Hi Allan I Just love your meandering melodies , and thats the hard part there´s always a surprise in store...... nice one

I´m always jealous of these bloody clear sounding recordings mine in comparison are all muddy and muddled ..a bit like my brain ....good song

I hate to sound boring but Its just another great track , always faultless playing and production ..now can you please post a crap song with bad timming and offkey vocals so that at least i can look myself in the mirror and feel a bit better in myself another great track cheers yours enviously P

Yeah great song and well sung , and the background voices really added that something extra ..cheers p

Hi Tim , well this one stretched my musical mind a few times which is always a good thing so i had to go back a few times to re listsen...... nice one cheers P

Gary just soo beauitful your voice was absolutely perfect and the live recording faultless and thats very difficult to pull off ,once again thanks for posting just great .....

Yes Bjorn , lovely composition really clear and crisp recording ( if thats the technical jargon) cheers i liked it very much .

Not much of an ambiant man myself but I listened to the end and was chilled out, pleasant trip super sounds ,

Hi this was lovely , i have a real problem with recording acoustic guitars , but you seem to have nailed it great sound nice composition .

Hi Chaps thanks for all your comments , considering I wasnt going to persue this song any further it was only due to all the super response and encouragement from you guys that I started again almost from scratch and brought it thus far it seems i get to a point that i play the song and record the so many times over that i get ``rose tinted glasses´´ on the brain where i just cant see/hear the Wonky bits anymore (the strings bridge timing is out) ...so i´ll, as Mark rightly states i I should invest in some ..additional time consuming , boring , tedious timing editing, once again thanks you for being so generous in your compliments and comments .....as my teacher used to say ....good but can do better cheers P

Hi Doug, I really liked the guitar tone and the harmonies did the trick

I think all the sounds are a bit in yer face , that said its beautiful, it meanders on and on and as bjorn said it needs a recuring theme , but it still sounded great, lovely instuments ,

Well thanks for all your comments , I put quite a few hour`s in and well added new vocals , bridge etc never imagined i´d get such a positive response to this one as i binned it almost as fast as i wrote it .... so thanks for the support.... Suburban Susan by paul bush She goes on every demonstration not just for the cause, it beats being alone, she straps herself to the mast, to hide her dubious past, While your new friends are stuck to the road … Well you’ve been telling lies about your family ties you don’t come from a broken home, Well she`s you’re a semi detached Aristocrat, dressing down for her gig on the road chorus Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, untill the ugly girls red In the face , Well you can all lock all your arms, outside those factory farms. saving the human race. Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, And strap yourselves onto the fence, well wave your banners high, next to the guy who reeks of pertuly oil and incense Well the kids left home now your all alone, And your man´s got much better things to do well you’ve re-read all your books , and now your fading looks are staring in the mirror at you .. If there’s just a slim chance, a whiff of romance, When loneliness gets to you, Well just fantasy, but it might just be the right thing to pull you on through, chorus Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, and the pudgy girl still getting no breaks Well she´s coloured her hair , more times than cher And screamed slogan’s till she`s blue in the face Bridge She`s never been noticed for being a woman, first time she`s felt part of the ``in´´crowd, now she cries out loud.. …..solo…... Chorus Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, And miss piggy is still up for grabs and all the feminists smiled with their adopted child And the vegans have eat all of the cake Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar In the hope of being on t.v Well they marched just a mile, with their self-righteous smiles Blowing whistles and tambourines Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, We´ll meet up back at the bar Switch on the BBC is it you is it me? Just like daytime tv star

Thanks Bjorn , I never know if the songs i write are good or not , I try and do something different sometimes it works sometimes not and i think ``Flint´´ was one of those where the message was more dominant than the song so i think i was pleased with that one......... doesnt happen very often cheers

Great vocals , and i love the harmonies right up my street this one well worth completing

Oh well! at first i thought ??? but i slowly fell in love with this song so much in there, bloody lots of everything, very very clever musicaly brilliant well bloody done I´m jealous cheers

Sorry to hear of your loss ..you must be devastated , our baby cat died 2 months ago our hearts are still breaking , wish you well

Hi whoisp , yes its well worth a bash loved the piano chord changes , run with it ; i wrote a song in the summer (2-3 days) I thought it wasnt up to much , went back to it last week and re-worked it , and Ive almost re recorded it all once again and it now sounds fine so one can never tel,l but that what you have so far sounded more than fine well worth staying with cheers P

Great production I´m envious of the sublime guitar playing , well the whole thing really