Paul Bush Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Once again thanks for the input I hope Ive rectified the wobbly bits 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Seems a little wobbly at the beginning but it settled down in to pleasant listen in the end. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaveT2 Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Sounds good, there is still something strange from about 7 to 13 seconds where it seems to get off beat and a little extra thump, almost like a microphone pop sound. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Hi Paul - I like this but have to agree as Wookie says, something a little wobbly at the start. Apart from that, really enjoyed it Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted October 6, 2022 Share Posted October 6, 2022 Paul , Great well written "feel good" song! The vocals and guitar work was really nice. A few things still to work out in it , but I Liked the Allman Bros. sounding intro. Hope to hear a remix.. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Art Scientists Posted October 7, 2022 Share Posted October 7, 2022 Yes, there is something clashing rhythmically in the first part of the song. Sounds like maybe a bass or bass drum part that is clashing? Might just be the way you are processing it. Sounds good though, otherwise! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted October 7, 2022 Share Posted October 7, 2022 great vx and chorus and yes, the whole song rocks along quite nicely....enjoyed it very much....probaby in the Top Ten of the all the songs i've heard here 🎶🎶🎶🎶 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted October 8, 2022 Share Posted October 8, 2022 Bass is ahead of the drums. But good groove potential, I like the instrumentation. I'll check back for sure! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted October 12, 2022 Share Posted October 12, 2022 You have captured that "Americana" style of song. Over all I think that you have a very good song. Perhaps a few tweaks mentioned above and it will be radio! I enjoyed it --- nice one!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted October 12, 2022 Share Posted October 12, 2022 Nice feel to this song. I think the kick is louder than the bass part - but just my opinion - being a bass player by trade, I'll always scream and cry about that! Great song though. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted October 13, 2022 Author Share Posted October 13, 2022 On 10/7/2022 at 10:47 PM, Larry T. said: great vx and chorus and yes, the whole song rocks along quite nicely....enjoyed it very much....probaby in the Top Ten of the all the songs i've heard here 🎶🎶🎶🎶 Thanks Larry thats really kind , like all my songs it started of with the acoustic chords and then it just developed , I had a lot of fun with this one using the arranger mode, saved me a lot of time, I liked doing the backing vocals , and the solo, once agian thanks or all the encouraging comments cheers P 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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