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A rock/modern song for you to pick apart!

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But here's a song that I've worked on awhile - it's all part of a rock opera that I've recorded. It's a story of a person born with parts of both genders. 

Please tell me what you think, good or bad!

Timbo

PS Got permission from the scientist who took this cool photo of a spider embryo!

 

 

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ahhhhhhhhhhh the backwards sounds.huge recording as well as wonderful sound.great song.sounds like it came from u.k.jack c.

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Well handled story telling arrangement. Really liking the arp-y accompaniments and sound fx. The voc track could use some leveling for consistency. Nicely done!
-Bjorn

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On 2/14/2021 at 1:43 PM, jack c. said:

ahhhhhhhhhhh the backwards sounds.huge recording as well as wonderful sound.great song.sounds like it came from u.k.jack c.

Who is this u.k.jack c of which you speak? 😶

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15 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

Well handled story telling arrangement. Really liking the arp-y accompaniments and sound fx. The voc track could use some leveling for consistency. Nicely done!
-Bjorn

Thanks Bjorn! It was a fun song to do, 14th on the album so it was where the meat of the action was taking place. Poor lead character cut off his legs for robotic ones, all trying to escape his birth and upbringing.

Timbo

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19 hours ago, timboalogo said:

Who is this u.k.jack c of which you speak? 

                      sounds like an english band,jack c.

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I am with Bjorn the vocals need a little riding to sit better with the rest of the mix, but this is well crafted and well captured.  Thanks for sharing.

As to being tortured for being different, no doubt, this world never learns from the past it repeats the same mistake from generation to generation unfortunately.

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this is really well put together and as people above have said, it has a great story. Enjoyed the listen

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good song, and a good mix - i didn't notice the vocal issue much, sounded OK to me (listening on small speakers though)

Nigel

 

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On 2/24/2021 at 8:41 PM, DeeringAmps said:

Hope this not too autobiographical.

Some good advice above, overall very interesting...

t

Not autobiographical at all! I still have both legs. And thanks for the listens all!

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