jack c.

real cool song feel/chord changes.jack c.

lower lead guitar.i like time signature/song.jack c.

harmony needs some tweaking and lower volume.some of your lead notes a tad off and phasing needs some tweaking.your on correct path.jack c.

thanks for more insight.i used cal on cymbals so how can eachbeat be the same?jack c.i think what your saying is to use another type hh cymbal for more flavor?

well done young man.jack c.

yes jesus there are answers.man beautiful composition.jack c.

thanks larry.jack c.

thanks for listen/comments.jack c. explain how to achieve this.i used cakewalkscal.jack c.

nice tones.jack c.

great huge sound.check some of your voice notes a tad out of pitch.good work though.jack c.nice harmony

man ya took me to ends of our universe.nice.jack c.

larry:please ask me/us for help in this forum and it will be many times easier.jack c.

simply nice.jack c.

nice poppy song.jack c.

i never know what to expect from me.thanks for listen.jack c.

boy ya like that ambient pop music.i'd like to hear some drum bass drum/tom rolls like thunder here and their.lovely song.jack c.

man what a voice and production.bring up bass guitar/kick.jack c.

nice.how about strings in parts?jack c.

real fine.on the piano melody put/double its melody---------------sax----synth.jack c.

thanks mate.jack c.

nicely done.jack c.

thanks mate.jack c.

i had to give another listen.some spooky turkist type melodies.sounds like ya double tracked some guitar parts or are they synths(if so what synths)some spots need a touch of quantize.highly interesting song.jack c.