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Mr Screed - I hope you are doing fabulously. I like the rhythm guitar groove on this one. Not sure why but it reminded me of something from the White Album

Hi Jerry - this is a very pretty tune. I like the unusual mix of sounds/genres.

wow, I really like this - it took and kept my interest right from the start. I agree with Grem - it's far from lo-fi

sounds like a good start to a song but needs some development. I like the guitar sounds you are using

cool FJ - everything is where it should be in the mix. I listened to The Beginning (original mix?) What are you using for the video?

lovely groove David and I like the subtle percussion. It would be nice to have full drums coming in later to take it to the next level

wowzer Gary - great atmospheric recording and fantastic use of panning setting up the sound stage. Very enjoyable listen

Andy - definitely something in the making here - carry on!

great stuff Tom - really enjoyed this. I'm a sucker for piano trills and harmonica

Hi Kevin - just piping up with the same comments really. Good song and performances just needs a bit of work on the mix. Enjoyed it

Very cool - nicely done

Merci beaucoup Olivier You are very kind

lol - no worries mate. The definition I saw made total sense - I am a bit over optimistic at times - like a labrador

Thanks so much Andy - very kind of you I always stop at Level 42 James is very well David . I have to admit that I had to look up quixotic and now I HAVE to use it in a song. Cheers

She's very neutral about it Wookster. Thanks mate Cheers Thanks Old Joad

Nice song Andy. Mixwise, maybe bring the music up and the vocal down a tad.

Hi forum folks Here's a new song that I co-wrote with Patty Lakamp (lyrics) and has James Griffiths playing on guitar. Lyrics below link The Next Level © 2019 Lyrics by Patty Lakamp Music by Daryl Greenway Performed by Staypress Guitar by James Griffiths @jyemz V1 I’m happy with my girlfriend But we have a looming issue Just what is this Next Level She wants to take us to? V2 I’m really only guessing Cuz it’s hard for me to picture And what is it exactly She wants me to deliver Chorus The dreaded Next Level Scares me half to death She’s got me unsettled And out of my depth I’m not sure what I’m s’posed to do All she said is Something New I hope it's not too stressful That dreaded Next Level Instr. Break V3 She has these expectations I might need a refresher I really don’t want to lose her, but I don't perform well under pressure Chorus The dreaded Next Level Scares me half to death She’s got me unsettled And out of my depth I’m not sure what I’m s’posed to do All she said is Something New I hope it's not too stressful That dreaded Next Level Instr. Break Bridge How many levels are there? And what comes after this? And what does she expect of me? And what if I resist? And why can’t we just stay right here? I like the way it is Chorus The dreaded Next Level Scares me half to death She’s got me unsettled And out of my depth I’m not sure what I’m s’posed to do All she said is Something New I hope it's not too stressful That dreaded Next Level It sounds experimental That dreaded Next Level

wow - this is a gorgeous song. Really well done Spak

woah - this is bloody marvelous Kenny

This is lovely Olivier - really mellow. Everything sits in the mix perfectly

we also don't belong to them. You are my hero

This is brilliant - that squelchy noise sounds like my conscience stay off the meds mate - it's all about the money not your health.

Welcome Audisee. This is pretty damn cool. Sonically sounds great but maybe the hi-hats are a little in your face

Thanks a lot Pistolpete - very kind of you Cool - I'm glad it came across well. Thanks mate Thanks Lasse my mate - sorry to hear you are going through it too - live for today my friend

Cheers Kenny - you're too kind mate thanks so much Freddy Very kind of you Paul - thanks mate