Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 7, 2023 Share Posted December 7, 2023 Hi all! I got kind of a challenge from my wife; could you take this song-lyrics I just wrote, and make a song out of it. (Lyrics in Norwegian). Then this happened in a few days I'd love some feedback from you on what I need to improve for my next song. PS! Made from scratch in Sonar Beta 😍 Best regards Fjellmann 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 8, 2023 Author Share Posted December 8, 2023 No room for improvement? 😂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikkie Posted December 8, 2023 Share Posted December 8, 2023 Hi Kjetil, I can only hear a few seconds, can't go to spotify, I would take another listen to your bends on guitar, they're not in tune but maybe you want it this way 😉 Rik Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 8, 2023 Author Share Posted December 8, 2023 Maybe a better streaming service: 26 minutes ago, Rikkie said: Hi Kjetil, I can only hear a few seconds, can't go to spotify, I would take another listen to your bends on guitar, they're not in tune but maybe you want it this way 😉 Rik The not in tune bends are most intentional A better streaming service maybe: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted December 8, 2023 Share Posted December 8, 2023 Sounds real good to me, Kjetil. That little hand clapper every other measure or so is a little distracting but that's probably just me. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Vere Posted December 9, 2023 Share Posted December 9, 2023 (edited) Really good mix I found no flaws at all. Weirdly enough this reminds me of a Mexican group I love called Mana. They use same sort of instrumentation. And I can’t understand the lyrics but that’s not a problem if it’s great music! Good job. Edited December 9, 2023 by John Vere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted December 9, 2023 Share Posted December 9, 2023 Kjetil , I Loved the guitar part at 1:23. got a little of that U2 feel. I think the mix sounds Very nice. If I were to change anything I think I would try to thicken up the lead vocals a little. Maybe reducing the brightness a little would help ?? hyggelig .. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted December 9, 2023 Share Posted December 9, 2023 Sounds pretty good to me, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 9, 2023 Author Share Posted December 9, 2023 3 hours ago, KSband said: Sounds pretty good to me, nice job. Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 9, 2023 Author Share Posted December 9, 2023 5 hours ago, mark skinner said: Kjetil , I Loved the guitar part at 1:23. got a little of that U2 feel. I think the mix sounds Very nice. If I were to change anything I think I would try to thicken up the lead vocals a little. Maybe reducing the brightness a little would help ?? hyggelig .. mark Thank you I will look into my vocal-chain on my next one. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 9, 2023 Author Share Posted December 9, 2023 15 hours ago, John Vere said: Really good mix I found no flaws at all. Weirdly enough this reminds me of a Mexican group I love called Mana. They use same sort of instrumentation. And I can’t understand the lyrics but that’s not a problem if it’s great music! Good job. Thank you Mexican/Norwegian... same, same 😍 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 9, 2023 Author Share Posted December 9, 2023 21 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Sounds real good to me, Kjetil. That little hand clapper every other measure or so is a little distracting but that's probably just me. -Bjorn Thank you It's supposed to be a bit annoying, the clapper-thingy (It's claves). Was not sure about it though...but now I know that it worked - kind of 😎 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted December 10, 2023 Share Posted December 10, 2023 Hi Kjetil I think this is a very good track and mix is good Excellent Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted December 11, 2023 Share Posted December 11, 2023 Not my kind of stuff as I don't get the lyric but the mix is fine and clean SR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 13, 2023 Author Share Posted December 13, 2023 On 12/10/2023 at 1:31 PM, Bajan Blue said: Hi Kjetil I think this is a very good track and mix is good Excellent Nigel Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 13, 2023 Author Share Posted December 13, 2023 On 12/11/2023 at 2:13 PM, Supa Reels said: Not my kind of stuff as I don't get the lyric but the mix is fine and clean SR Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted December 15, 2023 Share Posted December 15, 2023 Same problem here with the Spotify link that was also overly loud the little bit it did play making it sound all squashed. The soundcloud mix level sounds much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kjetil Fjellmann Posted December 15, 2023 Author Share Posted December 15, 2023 That's odd. Over here, it sounds the same on SoundCloud and on Spotify. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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