Paul Bush Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 (edited) Hi chaps here`s a new one, ``the sun will rise´´ still strugling with timing issues though (there`s a wife joke there but i wont) Yeah its a song about us poor men ,...hearing so much about trans this and trans that, women this and feminists that and well ... .... even us men have problems !! but hey.... the sun will ..rise ..cheers paul https://www.bandlab.com/user7005896328090268/the-sun-will-rise-pre-master-mixdown-1-2705-fa7240d0?revId=45a91397-74fc-ed11-907c-6045bd31b313 Youre tossing and turning, in and out of a dream surpressing the anger tugging at your sleeve... The suns gonna rise, the world keep`s a moving on Dont let it consume you ,Try walking away, Swallow you anger , be a better man... The suns gonna rise, the world keep`s a moving on Bridge (E) You stand in darkness , and the rain is black as the sea, There`s no helping me, its harder to breath.... ....The helplesness inside of me ... ....The helplesness inside of me ... All the weight on my shoulders , holding me down, high expectations , spinning me around The suns gonna rise, the world keep`s a moving on Bridge The sun will rise but seems not so bright we got nothing more but time These cruel mind games are such a crime .... burning up inside in me ... .... churning up inside in me ... ….... solo...... … Burning up inside in me ... … Burning up inside in me ... The sun will rise but seems not so bright we got nothing more but time These cruel mind games are such a crime ........ Burning up inside in me …..... Churning up inside in me Edited May 28, 2023 by Paul Bush Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 Hi Paul. It's saying content unavailable for me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 Same here 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 (edited) AND me but the lyrics are great ... Edited May 27, 2023 by Supa Reels 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted May 28, 2023 Author Share Posted May 28, 2023 Hi chaps Yes Ive sorted that out I didnt push the right button on bandlab to publish ..silly silly me ..its an age thing .....cheers p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted May 28, 2023 Author Share Posted May 28, 2023 20 hours ago, daryl1968 said: Hi Paul. It's saying content unavailable for me yeah sorry about that Ive sorted out the problem now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supa Reels Posted May 28, 2023 Share Posted May 28, 2023 (edited) Great Edited May 30, 2023 by Supa Reels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted May 28, 2023 Share Posted May 28, 2023 Cool song, great vocal and playing Paul. Love the backing vocals - how many layers have you got going on there? I am also hearing some timing issues but they don't detract from the overall track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted May 28, 2023 Author Share Posted May 28, 2023 (edited) Hi Daryl , well those backing vocals were recorded three times (sound on sound)on one track then once again three times etc one another track and then panned left and right all choruses together (30 times) then the high backing vocals 4 times (20 times ) after that i lost count I think I may have copied and pasted towards the end of the song and panned down the middle... once i find the right harmonie its easy to dupilcate ..nice cup tea to pull me through and off i go ....I also have a pre vocal warm up track that takes about twenty minutes really saves the day... unbelivable... thanks for commenting cheers paul Edited May 28, 2023 by Paul Bush 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted May 30, 2023 Share Posted May 30, 2023 Love it. You have that one line: The suns gonna rise, the world keeps moving on Very catchy, so it seems to me it should be emphasized more, like a chorus. Or put it in again at the end of the song. Well just a suggestion. Always enjoy your songs. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted May 30, 2023 Share Posted May 30, 2023 Vocals sound great, and guitar has some excellent licks. I like the piano fills you threw in there as well. Yeah there some timing issues, but it's still some great work. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 31, 2023 Share Posted May 31, 2023 Hi Paul, another great creative song here ! . . . you've really got an excellent interplay with the guitar and vocals going back and forth in this one, and some interesting chord changes. Always a fan of your vocal delivery, just enjoyable to listen to, and you really lean into your electric guitar in this one. with a great tone. When you mention the timing issues, it's usually all about the drums . . . and it occurred to me if the kick drum had way more bottom, it wouldn't be as obvious in certain sections . . . audio psychoacoustic phenomenon, the ears hear the low end differently. Just my opinion that the drums should occupy the whole audio spectrum, but your drum mix seems only concentrated in the very middle. The harmonies and lead vocals reveal a lot of work went into this, and I look forward to your more polished master mix version. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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