treesha Posted April 18, 2023 Author Share Posted April 18, 2023 On 4/17/2023 at 1:12 PM, whoisp said: Yes i really enjoyed it, I got the backing vocal ideas in two places and was screaming out to me lol Really adds to chouse and those two emphasis lines i was saying. I do think you need some sort of break so it gives the listener chance to recalibrate the ears. Its like you race for start to finish, its not a big deal but i believe it needed it. Hi P, I appreciate your attention and enthusiasm ! Honestly I can hear you doing those lines. I thought about your comment about singing the whole way through with no break, funny I didn't even notice I did that (feedback is always so interesting). Since it was a kind of vent song for me I just kept venting without needing a break ha. Thanks again for your messages, I think you have some good ideas you offer and I will definitely keep them in mind. I am onto the instrumental for now, no singing on this one, having fun with it and enjoying not having to mess with vocals for now ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted April 19, 2023 Share Posted April 19, 2023 I love the lyrics! I also like the bass, good jog there. There is much going on underneath, and I can appreciate that. I'm still trying to figure out all the different instruments in there. I also like the way you did the backing vocals. Nice work! I enjoyed it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted April 20, 2023 Author Share Posted April 20, 2023 Hi Jesse, Thanks so much for listening and your comment ! the lyrics have a special place in my heart ha glad you enjoyed them. I had a blast with the bass and the backing vocals. If you want to know the instruments, I put what I used in the original post, if you like a mystery don't look there. I'm glad to know you enjoyed it! thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted April 20, 2023 Share Posted April 20, 2023 good job.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted April 21, 2023 Author Share Posted April 21, 2023 23 hours ago, jack c. said: good job.jack c. Hi jack c thanks for listening and your good job comment. I appreciate both! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted April 22, 2023 Share Posted April 22, 2023 Quirky and unusual but cool nonetheless. Interesting choice of sounds. 😀John B 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted April 22, 2023 Share Posted April 22, 2023 Really like this - I think that Whiosp has good ideas, but I like it already!! Cool Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted April 22, 2023 Author Share Posted April 22, 2023 17 hours ago, Johnbee58 said: Quirky and unusual but cool nonetheless. Interesting choice of sounds. 😀John B Hi John B Thanks for listening and your feedback, always interesting to know what folks think, glad you thought it is cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted April 22, 2023 Author Share Posted April 22, 2023 10 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Really like this - I think that Whiosp has good ideas, but I like it already!! Cool Nigel Hi Nigel, Thanks for listening and your feedback. Glad you like it as is! Mr P makes good productions and does offer some good suggestions and I might be doing a collaboration on this one with a male who is interested in singing it, so I think if that happens I will dub it out in some places etc. Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted April 23, 2023 Share Posted April 23, 2023 Nice and quirky - I agree with a previous comment re a clash with the vocal. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted April 23, 2023 Share Posted April 23, 2023 Cool tune. I like when those horns come in and the whole idea of the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted April 23, 2023 Author Share Posted April 23, 2023 14 hours ago, daryl1968 said: Nice and quirky - I agree with a previous comment re a clash with the vocal. Hi daryl1968, Thank you for listening and for the feedback, glad you found it nice and quirky, maybe the quirkiness is part of the clash? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted April 23, 2023 Author Share Posted April 23, 2023 2 hours ago, steve@baselines.com said: Cool tune. I like when those horns come in and the whole idea of the song. Hi steve@baselines.com Thank you for listening and for your comment. I appreciate that you like the whole idea of the song, its kinda personal lyrically but it seems people can relate to the words, I had fun adding the horns and it was cool to make the song so Im glad it comes across as cool to you. Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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