SPAK

A bit snuffy ... although understandable. Thing is, it's hard to say cheerio to Cakewalk and your Cyber mates when some of us reluctantly looked elsewhere for a sustainable bit of DAW at a cost. I am guilty of using Sonar platinum ( since the world began ) plus the BandLabs' version (far more stable IMO) and Cubase 10 in the studio. All three have their limitations but if I could have predicted the future I would have stayed in harness with Sonar Platinum, that said, I have to agree with Mr Jarvis in that learning about other DAW's lets you understand how good the Sonar package is/was ... but so many pro's use other DAW's for ease of sending data and this is helpful when similar software is used at both ends..... At the end of the day, this became a site that was always the friendly 'go to' for the songwriter and musician who used Sonar.... but live and let live ... please Just saying is all SPAK

SC comment ....can't swear here LOL

I really love your vocal, expressive and meaningful. Drums for me work ... but then again ( 'cause your a metal man at heart) a bit too high in the mix. So much feeling here ... she must be in your heart 'cause you hear it in your voice.... the rest of this needs a pro ... it's a bit of work that needs their ears and experience ... keep it, and come back to it when it's fresh again. That said ... I love this muchly mate SupaReels

Really like this one Rex ... godda agree with Leadfoot here so Everly Brothers sounding .. sweet SR

Without guys like your good self, us oldies would never know this work was done any other way than in a semi or pro setup ... My feeling is try and do your own ideas and create something that's belongs to you ... then post it .... Def sounds like your a dedicated musoe so keep it mate .. . All the best Steve

Great job and can't believe the mix ...on a 'phone! .. How long did this impressive bit of work take ? ...

So angry that, although I won't be missed, I really don't wanna be associated with cheap shots ... and cheap laughs ...yep I really do appreciate the back peddle mate, but it wasn't an apology wanted or an easy one liner from you, lets not forget the responsibility you have .... 364 members!? 1.265 posts ... shame on you, and believe me I like a laugh behind the hand and no prude, but this isn't FB or twitter account ... or indeed a little boys "Oh matron !" site ... it's supposed to be a semi pro musicians site or the mother site was .... Yep IMO very much out of order!😠

Can't believe the shit that's written here ... she is a fantastic bass player, song writer and musician .. don't mean to take the high ground but this IS a songwriters and musoes site ain't it ?! If you lot can get heat from a right tit look in the Fukn mirror! 😠

Wow Thanks for the post😮

Steady on !!! no ones cuddling up my back with some 4/4 ! 😮

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Yep ..in agreement with Lynn. I think this piece of work would be great on one of those 'How it's made' programs 'cause it's hard to tie it down ... the moment you think you nailed it the song buggers off in another direction ... I like this one Wooks Gonna lay down now and listen to some 4/4 ...........

Reminds me of time when I had one too many and had to negotiate a downhill trip back home 😜 .. Very clever, typical you .... Stay well my friend Steve

Listened to this a few times and I'm in agreement with Lynn, in that the phrasing is awkward in places and distracts the listener from, what I believe, are very powerful lyrics so maybe try not to loose the meter by reducing the lyric if it's a problem in everyday life. All in this is one of your best songs. For me I think the vocal needs some help in places as you have a soft breathy kind of voice .. I think what gets me is the music box sound of guitar against your vocal, I really like this one mate as it's my kind of genre 😏 ... so,.. still needs a little work though, ( IMO ) but an excellent bit of songwriting ... warts and all 👌😉 Best Regards Steve

I can't remember this from the mother site but I like it Lynn ... def your genre and really tight (lot of work here so well done mate ) Steve

Love it! One of my favs ... done it justice/ mix sounds O.k in here, but hey ho! Steve

R E L A X I N G .... Great stuff

All fine here ... nice mix and rendish' ...thought this song had lyrics ..oh well 😉 SPAK

Got it mate!! Many thanks 'cause the whole song pivots on that lyric and if you don't get that, then it IS a sad song ... for the sake of sounding patronizing, which is not my intention ... Well done you, so glad for the comment. All the best Steve

Thanks for the comment, of which seems to be the overall feel here ... a large scotch and a gun me thinks LOL

Thanks mate ... I passed the comment on and he gave a big grin ... promise I won't do a post like this again ... 🙄

Lynn: Bjorn : Amiller : Ed D : Bob : Paul : Tom : Daryl : Olivier : freddy j. First of all sorry for the delay in thanking you for the listen, I've been away in London and not in the toy room. I think your right about the reverb Lynn and given the song it's self I should have put a touch more bass on the reverb. I love the fact that you get the feel of this work and along with Bjorn and Amiller it's knockout that you understood the complicated story … so big thanks for your time! Bob, I listen to your stuff and it surprises me that you like my stuff so I'm made up with your comments, and for what it's worth when I finished it I also felt it had a Genesis vibe with Ultravox (not to sound big headed ) …. Paul thanks for your time and comment Tom your comments are always much appreciated … I think the vocal falls off due to a noise gate setting that was wrong. I used a Rode Nt1 with a Yamaha compressor 2020 and paid too much attention to overall feel of the work and not enough when doing the mix .. ! It was to be played live by a mate but was deemed too sad so it was never shown the light of an audience .. till now. Thankyou for listening. Daryl …. Pretty sure she won't … lol Olivier ... Thanks my friend for caring, and no, there's nothing personal in the work or injury to my heart just another story to invoke the listener to wonder what comes next … you have to hear it twice ( at least ) to get the meaning I think. Thankyou for the comment and I will be putting the lyrics up on Sound Cloud shortly so I hope you'll get a chance to read them … thankyou for the comments freddy j … Many thanks for your time in listening, I would refer you to the above comment I made to Olivier regarding it being personal, I felt this should have been a blues number but I couldn't get the meter or feel right so it ended up not really being and specific genre, I'm supa happy you enjoyed it thankyou.

Aspects of love, David ...there's a power when someone else feels your pain and then protects you from those that take that love and abuse the trust within it .. The main character does just that, and in the song he tells her previous lover, she no longer needs him, she is loved by another no matter what he does ...chance gone .... this time her love is appreciated .... so not really negative at all!

She Doesn't Want you (Anymore) She doesn't like you, doesn't matter what you do She doesn't want you, she doesn't want anything from you And you've tried … Day after day But each time you look at her, …... She just looks away, She doesn't need you, she doesn't even look your way And 'though your talking … she won't hear the words you say And you try so hard to make her see, the little things you do And you try so hard to be the man, she saw in you .. She's become an obsession, gnawing at you inside She'd be delighted at how many times you cried … Because It doesn't seem that long ago this woman you adore Shared her love and gave her heart … but you always wanted more, And you abused it! … threw it all away! And now your sorry … all your effort tried in vain, Because there's someone new within her life to end her misery Someone who believes in her … someone just like me She doesn't need you (Double track vox on M8) Can you hear the words inside your head every-time you close your eyes? Do you feel the pain as she walked away, when she knew of all you lies? Harboured deep inside the dark your thoughts are black as coal The devil waits with baited breath to own your very soul ( single vox ) You'll never know the happiness she could have given you Oh Oww a ...Mmm … She doesn't want you she doesn't need you anymore She doesn't love you, and you can't hurt her for sure Because someone who believes in her is standing in your way And I won't back down and I won't let go so believe me when I say! She doesn't love you, doesn't need you anymore Doesn't want you doesn't want it anymore Doesn't love you … she doesn't love you she doesn't need you …...