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Great sounding track, nice work.

I really don't like watching a video unless it's a live performance, I feel like it influences my take on a song, that's just my problem. Really good song and production, sounds totally pro.

There is so much reverb/delay on the guitar that it's hard to tell what is happening with the mix.

Cool stuff, you did some crazy playing on there.

Thanks freddy j,. markno999 not familiar with that plugin, looks interesting but not cheap.

Thanks for the thoughts Mark. I have felt the bass was kind of muddy and have played with EQ quite a bit but doesn't get much better. I think it might be my sloppy bass playing letting the notes ring out over each other. Hadn't really thought about the piano tone, I usually use it as is, it's Addictive keys grand, maybe there is a better grand out there, I'll take a look at the options in there.

Thanks for checking it out Nigel.

Really good work and nice arrangement.

Good song and nice work on all the vocals. I think the vocal could be just a touch louder and the synth horn or whatever that is needs to come down, it's overpowering the vocal.

Nice track, very chill.

Let me know if this sounds good.

Thanks for the listen and comments guys. l agree the piano is not great. I did some work on it and will repost.

https://www.bandlab.com/studedude/brazilian-breeze-c26f0829?revId=2e084e64-db65-ed11-9f5e-000d3a980004 This is one I posted a couple years ago with piano but never loved it. Reworked it with sax and remix. Let me know how the mix sounds.

I've had to resort to recording the synth to another track so I don't loose it. I've had the same problem with Sweetcase and the strings Cakewalk includes.

I've had recurring problems with a recorded midi keyboard part that will randomly stop playing, I have to replace the synth to get it going again. Today my Xpand2 kept stopping and even after a reload it stopped in the middle of playing a midi section.

Sounds good.

Hey the Beatles wrote a lot of bubble gum hits too. Good job, another hooky tune.

Keith, you are a very good song writer, I'm jealous. Your style reminds me of Jeff Lynne. The only comment I have is the vocal could be just a tiny touch louder.

Sounds good, nice vocals.

Nicely done, like your lead.

Beautiful piano playing, sounds like something Bob James might do. My only crit is the vocal seems a bit low, maybe needs some compression to be more up front?

Like this one, nice interplay of guitars and the harmonica was cool too.

I like the different synth sounds, very creative.

Thanks much RikF and MichaelJohn. Yes real sax, a tenor I got on Amazon warehouse for 200 bucks, it is a nice sounding horn. Sax is a tough instrument to play well, I have a long way to go but it's fun learning.

Moody groove man, sounds good.