Larry T.

hope you are over the virus....beautiful images in the video....the music augmented the video perfectly....the marriage of acoustic guitar, clarinet and strings works excellently ????

beautiful ????

agree with above comments....nicely done production you have there (kind of an early Kinks feel ?) ....as i mentioned about your other song i'd put some background vox in ????

enjoyed the music....kept thinking of "The Lark Ascending" (must have been the video)...all the motifs complimented and moved the piece nicely forward throughout ????

just my own personal tastes would be to have this piece work as a stand alone piece of music, remove the effects (but keep the birds)....you really put together a lot of different motifs and have them all fit together so seamlessly ????

very nice song, vox, arrangement, production, mix, mastering....I would consider adding backing vox to give the piece more depth....i assume you did everything (wrote, played, engineered, mixed, mastered....that's how i do my stuff), if so, you did a great job ????

beautiful....transcendent ????

outstanding in every way as usual ????

they're both good in their own ways....i prefer the synth-centric version ????

I was going to ask you about the sax as well. At times it sounds like a harmonica, other times like a sax....I guess it's a hard instrument to recreate electronically.

great job....enjoyed it ????

great job....the guitars sound fine but the mixed low synths sounded pretty awesome....wouldn't mine hearing the original mix with the guitars mixed lower and the synths brought up....vox was fine....enjoyed all of it ????

original, intriguing music, very well done....like something from David Lynch's "Twin Peaks"...i like it ????

nicely realized.....everything fits together so smoothly ????

track it....that is a real nice song, production, vox....the whole shebang....my personal taste would change the solo guitar to clean with no, or very little distortion, take some reverb off the vox and maybe edit out a verse or two to shorten the length....enjoy listening to it as is ????

very nicely arranged, played, recorded, mixed ????

very nice....really enjoy the beauty of the songs elegant yet powerful simplicity....there is a Russian duo called iamthe morning that you guys may find interesting and, hopefully, inspiring and useful....here is link to one of my favorites by them:

nice....enjoy listening to it....interesting notes on how you composed, that's what i love about music: there are no rules to writing it and the results can sometimes be an unexpected but amazing creation ????

well done again jack....provocative art....nice touches throughout....your vocals are getting better all the time....keep it up!!!! ????

your stuff always has that great professionally recorded, played and mix feel and this one is no exception....I don't comment on your songs as they are not in my wheelhouse but this one i really like....my only nitpick is I'd work on getting that arrival of the electric guitar part done with less bombast but more emotional flash, like a Jeff Beck solo ( listen to Stanley Clarke's song "Journey to Love" and check out Beck's lead guitar work on that)....????

nicely done cosmic soundscape....i'm working on one of those as well, using the Locrian scale as it creates a spacey, ominous atmosphere....cheers!!!! ????

really great tune....sounds, playing, arrangement, mix ????

really nicely done heavy prog guitar based piece....i have to be in the mood to listen to that stuff though ????

Hi Tom....Thanks for giving it a listen....and, Yes to "repetition" being a common occurance in ambient music....i love three minute rockers (the Duo Brothers stuff is really well done)....but i do enjoy listening to and trying to write other styles....i do ambient now because my recording capabilities are just getting started and feel it's a good way to learn the basics before going all "Bohemian Rhapsody"/mega production creations....cheers!!!! ????

Thank You very much David, glad you like the song....do you mean the overall top end needs an increase or just the last minute (which is where i've been debating whether or not to bring it up a decibal or two)?? ????