Larry T.

your compositional talent and ability to do "stop on a dime and land on your feet" all while keeping complete control of the song is so impressive....personally I would edit this down about a minute so as to tighten up the song as a whole....interesting and worth listening to as always jack ????

song: nice work on the alternating two chord motif....rhythm section moves along really well....the lead guitar truly makes this work, lyrical playing with a constant introduction of strong melodies that dovetail perfectly with the rhythm....this piece could be a part of larger composition ???? mix: I would mix the lead guitar a bit louder and double track a few riffs here and there and generally expand the guitar playing tastefully....cheers

hope you are over the virus....beautiful images in the video....the music augmented the video perfectly....the marriage of acoustic guitar, clarinet and strings works excellently ????

beautiful ????

agree with above comments....nicely done production you have there (kind of an early Kinks feel ?) ....as i mentioned about your other song i'd put some background vox in ????

enjoyed the music....kept thinking of "The Lark Ascending" (must have been the video)...all the motifs complimented and moved the piece nicely forward throughout ????

just my own personal tastes would be to have this piece work as a stand alone piece of music, remove the effects (but keep the birds)....you really put together a lot of different motifs and have them all fit together so seamlessly ????

very nice song, vox, arrangement, production, mix, mastering....I would consider adding backing vox to give the piece more depth....i assume you did everything (wrote, played, engineered, mixed, mastered....that's how i do my stuff), if so, you did a great job ????

beautiful....transcendent ????

outstanding in every way as usual ????

they're both good in their own ways....i prefer the synth-centric version ????

I was going to ask you about the sax as well. At times it sounds like a harmonica, other times like a sax....I guess it's a hard instrument to recreate electronically.

great job....enjoyed it ????

great job....the guitars sound fine but the mixed low synths sounded pretty awesome....wouldn't mine hearing the original mix with the guitars mixed lower and the synths brought up....vox was fine....enjoyed all of it ????

original, intriguing music, very well done....like something from David Lynch's "Twin Peaks"...i like it ????

nicely realized.....everything fits together so smoothly ????

track it....that is a real nice song, production, vox....the whole shebang....my personal taste would change the solo guitar to clean with no, or very little distortion, take some reverb off the vox and maybe edit out a verse or two to shorten the length....enjoy listening to it as is ????

very nicely arranged, played, recorded, mixed ????

very nice....really enjoy the beauty of the songs elegant yet powerful simplicity....there is a Russian duo called iamthe morning that you guys may find interesting and, hopefully, inspiring and useful....here is link to one of my favorites by them:

nice....enjoy listening to it....interesting notes on how you composed, that's what i love about music: there are no rules to writing it and the results can sometimes be an unexpected but amazing creation ????

well done again jack....provocative art....nice touches throughout....your vocals are getting better all the time....keep it up!!!! ????

your stuff always has that great professionally recorded, played and mix feel and this one is no exception....I don't comment on your songs as they are not in my wheelhouse but this one i really like....my only nitpick is I'd work on getting that arrival of the electric guitar part done with less bombast but more emotional flash, like a Jeff Beck solo ( listen to Stanley Clarke's song "Journey to Love" and check out Beck's lead guitar work on that)....????

nicely done cosmic soundscape....i'm working on one of those as well, using the Locrian scale as it creates a spacey, ominous atmosphere....cheers!!!! ????

really great tune....sounds, playing, arrangement, mix ????

really nicely done heavy prog guitar based piece....i have to be in the mood to listen to that stuff though ????