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  1. Yes, I did enjoy listening to this one. Great job on the orchestration. I agree with Jack about adding a bit of reverb to the lead instrument to get a fuller sound. -Bjorn
  2. You've got the style down for sure. The English is very good (the "curse" words are ok) but there are so many words flying by so fast I really didn't understand what you were saying. Maybe slow it down a bit? -Bjorn
  3. So this is your old Carpenters cover with a new vocal track? Sorry, I didn't quite follow how you did this. Anyway, sounds pretty good! If you're like me you probably have a lot of original material that you never got to finish, so now is the time. -Bjorn
  4. Very nice. I enjoyed it. I lived thru those events. When I see the newsreels from that time I realize how primitive the technology was compared to today. -Bjorn
  5. Congrats. Very satisfying conclusion to the Warp series. So are you going to use one of the music distribution companies for your CD? -Bjorn
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    Warp 9

    Busy boingy filter sweeps - very nice! 2:34 really like that sort of bell synth that comes in here Another winner for the Wookster. -Bjorn
  7. Great lyrics! Vocal is quite good and stands out well. Crits: some instruments seemed out of sync and the drum track needs some changeups. Very promising. -Bjorn
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    With Being

    treesha I really like the languid feel of your vocal with the unexpected reggae beat. Vocal got a little buried here and there but no biggie. -Bjorn
  9. Esther Nice mix, sounds really good. I went over to your Soundcloud page and I see you've been making music for a while. Welcome Bjorn
  10. Love it! Big thumbs up to you guys. -Bjorn
  11. Jesse, I'm forming an image of your band based on your comments. I like the jam. Sounds promising. -Bjorn
  12. Dorian mode? Sounds like a promising intro about to develop. Tempo could be increased. Nice one. -Bjorn
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    Warp 8

    Blue ribbon for Warp 8 I like the sparser sound on this one with the focus being on that one synth Really nice phrase ~1:40 and elsewhere. Great job! -Bjorn
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    Celestial

    David, I don't know about OMSI. Last planetarium I visited was at Univ of Oregon long time ago. Freddy Thanks as always Doug and Skyline Thanks for the comments Jesse, Thanks for listening. I'm not hearing the crackling you mentioned but I did notice a couple of other glitches I should fix.
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    black

    Jack I like the lyrics. Some of the parts are too long and repetitive Your voice has a David Byrne quality which kind of fits your quirky style (and I mean that in a good way, seriously). -Bjorn
  16. Epic and cinematic. Sounds promising to me. Around 0:44 I started hearing a thumping sound. Not sure if that's supposed to be in there? -Bjorn
  17. Outstanding work. One of the best non-professional (I'm assuming) videos I've seen. Excellent all around. Just a couple of quibbly crits. The space suit guy dance took me out of it and some of the mirror fx were bit too much. Just my opinion and doesn't take anything away. Love the video. -Bjorn
  18. Freddy, I love the chorus. Beautiful. Some of the delay effects seem off but I thought they worked anyway. You should get together with Jimmy Buffet and do a duet. I can only imagine what it's like tracking hurricanes when they're in your own neighborhood!
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    Monkees cover

    I don't think I've heard that Monkees song before. Sounds really good so thumbs up. I do remember your Troop and Camo video listed on the same page. Had to watch that one again. -Bjorn
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    Celestial

    Celestial A 5 minute video of NASA images set to music. Thanks for listening/commenting.
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    Closer

    Doug, can you come over and show me how to play the guitar? Thanks. Another well produced and arranged song. Very professional. I enjoyed listening to it. -Bjorn
  22. You took it down? Well darn I missed it. It's a familiar situation. Write a nice little phrase and immediately wonder if it's been done before. I tried one of those song identification apps (Shazam I think it's called) which was worthless. I just go with it and hope for the best. -Bjorn
  23. Steve, I do a lot of bird photography but I've never had them set up a nest so conveniently close like your robin. Our backyard security camera gets some interesting images now and then like overturned bird baths and big holes in the yard. Raccoons. It's always the raccoons. I really enjoyed your take on the song. And that last bit where the robin knocked over the camera is hilarious. -Bjorn
  24. I like the whirly synth bits at the beginning. Toe-tapping head-nodding groove makes me happy. Well done! -Bjorn
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