Dazzla Posted January 21 Share Posted January 21 (edited) Hey Guys, I've spent the last few months learning and taking feedback from the awesome forum and am happy to present my second track to you all your review and comments. With this song, I was going for a more upbeat vibe and wanted to factor in a guitar riff. Its electronish. I'm looking for feedback on every aspect of the song i.e. production quality, genre, vibe, target audience, etc. I want to take my production to the next level and am on the lookout to start adding more gear to make my content more professional sounding. Thanks and I hope you enjoy this one. Edited January 23 by Dazzla 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 21 Share Posted January 21 sounds fine but it needs to line up tighten up hi hat and music.jack c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted January 22 Share Posted January 22 Great little tune, reminds me of a carnival🤩 maybe a little Hi Pass Filter would brighten it up a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted January 22 Share Posted January 22 Interesting tune, some elements are overpowering others like the HH to forward and then the vocal sounds like it is in a difference space, It is also very boxy perhaps a little to much reverb and you have done a very deep bass cut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted January 23 Share Posted January 23 Hi Dazzla, I think this could be a very quirky piece with some more work on the mix. The HH as Wookiee says is overpowering and is gone at times also. I would start with working out the rhythm elements like the hh and whatever drums/bass are used. Maybe less HH hits and not so prominent. Then I would add the chordy stuff so they mix nicely, then I would put the vocals in. Lastly the accent stuff. As the song is now, I get what you are going for and like it, it just needs some changes. The vocals are good in form and attitude, but very dark and sound kinda far away from the song body. The song overall as it is now does not sound clear, its kinda muddy and the parts do not seem gelled together. I do enjoy it and encourage you to go further with it. Good luck and keep learning ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Vere Posted February 9 Share Posted February 9 (edited) Interesting The op returns last Saturday and seems to not have comment here or in the other post they abandoned?? I find it weird behaviour to post on user forums and not stay involved in your own threads. At least leave a Like or Thank you. Edit: Feb 13. Note the OP has returned to the forum a few times including since I posted this. Edited February 13 by John Vere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted February 10 Share Posted February 10 Lots of good advice already posted. Not exactly my genre so I’ll just suggest you continue on. Each tune is a learning experience… t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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