mark skinner Posted November 20, 2023 Author Share Posted November 20, 2023 @bjornpdx @Miguel Carzola and @Leadfoot. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and commenting. Thanks ! After taking a break from this and not listening to it , I found it pretty easy to do a final clean up of the pause and tempo change. I think it's as good as it will get. I'm calling it done and moving on. I Thank You All for your help. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Vere Posted November 21, 2023 Share Posted November 21, 2023 Overall one of the best listens I had all week and I’m listening to not just this stuff but everything. Yes that dang pause. You do realize you could experiment with the timing of it buy taking this master and put it a fresh new project and with ripple edit on removing a tiny bit of the silence. Just hit undo and keep experimenting with different amounts until you like it. I have a feeling if it was an amount equal to the timing of the first part as a 1/4 note? Right now it just seems a bit to long and is not really musical so to speak. Otherwise ignore me because everything else is 1st class. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted November 21, 2023 Author Share Posted November 21, 2023 Hey John , actually the pause around :49 is the "start" of the tempo change. So the pause is using the faster 80 bpm instead of the slower 68 bpm before it. Probably 4 quarter notes with the metronome. Maybe backing it up 1 or 2 quarters would make it flow better. I could easily split a "full" stereo mix and slide it around to see where it sounds best. Edit the project afterwards , if it works ... I agree it doesn't sound that musical. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Vere Posted November 21, 2023 Share Posted November 21, 2023 I think it’s worth the effort because the song is otherwise perfect. Just that one tiny flaw. Another idea I would be inclined to try would be to not end abruptly but sustained so that there is no silence. Like just one guitar chord. Or a quiet voice counting 2-3-4 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted November 21, 2023 Share Posted November 21, 2023 XLNT Mark! Loved it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted November 22, 2023 Share Posted November 22, 2023 On 11/10/2023 at 3:46 PM, mark skinner said: Cleaned up the tempo change transition in this remix . I'm calling it done .. ms Cool song. Sounds great. All instruments very clear and well recorded. Great vocal as well🎶🎶🎶🎶 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted November 22, 2023 Share Posted November 22, 2023 It felt to me like a couple more snare fill hits leading into the new tempo might help. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
subvibe Posted November 25, 2023 Share Posted November 25, 2023 Hi another great song , love the vocals .... reminds me a bit of Main Street by Bob Seger the guitar playing & arrangement is spot on The mix is crystal clear & very professional Top Stuff subvibe 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikkie Posted November 28, 2023 Share Posted November 28, 2023 Hi Mark, excellent song and vox, really like the acoustic guitar tone and playing, what guitar did you use ? Guitar solo should be longer ! 😉 I would insert a little pause after you sing "for me" and then pick up the tempo, anyway very well done. Rik 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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