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Really beautiful song. I feel like it's crying out for some congas and timbales. You come up with some very cool chord changes.

I like your song, it's pretty, nice chord changes. Sometimes the bass sounds slightly off the beat, but that's easy to fix in cakewalk. I think it would sound good if some drums came in in the middle of the song too (and or congas).

I agree with the above comments, good song, sonically sounds flat. Maybe download a good sounding commercial track to your daw and play it and compare, that might help mix it.

Your guitar solo reminds me of Frank Zappa. I like the guitar and piano left and right, sounds cool, good song. On my phones the bass and drums (maybe just the kick) sound kind of quiet. Good work!

I like the guitar sounds, good riffs. The drums sound thin to me but maybe that's what you are going for.

Thanks Paul!

Thanks! For some reason that scale made itself apparent in that spot which inspired the middle eastern vibe. Every thing happens by ear for me, I have no idea what scale I'm playing some times, other than pentatonic .

Thanks a lot!

Thanks much!

Thanks Mark, I'll check that out.

Wow, thanks for all the nice comments!

Nice! My music money has always flowed the same direction -away from me.

https://www.bandlab.com/studedude/wanted-1469c2b1 Something a bit different, some southern style rock featuring my wife Robin on 6 and 12 string acoustic guitar.

Thanks Lynn!

Just played it for my wife and she said " he sounds like Bret from flight of the concords", those guys write some very clever and funny songs, so I hope you take it as a compliment. I think I enjoyed it more the second time.

Thanks John!

Thanks! Going for a mix of Led Zep and Trower sounds.

Thanks! I think it would sound a lot better if I could actually play piano LOL.

Sounds good.

Thanks Wookiee.

That was a very nice arrangement.

Just tried it and it worked for me.

Thanks so much! Yes totally ripping off bridge of sighs, love Trower.

Really liked your song, very good lyrics and nice guitar playing. Like your voice too. You've got talent.

https://www.bandlab.com/studedude/sahara-5c984f20 Little more rocky song with a middle eastern vibe.