Johnbee58 Posted April 20, 2021 Share Posted April 20, 2021 (edited) Maybe you'll like it & maybe you won't but here it is. Using Toontrack EZ Keys Upright piano and Native instruments Strummed acoustic guitar among all the other usual samples. https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14211197 ? John B Edited April 20, 2021 by Johnbee58 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted April 20, 2021 Share Posted April 20, 2021 Good song, good vocal, and good mix! You've come a long way, John. This deserves a large audience. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted April 20, 2021 Share Posted April 20, 2021 nice piano sound.i'd like to hear thicker voice.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruralrocker2010 Posted April 21, 2021 Share Posted April 21, 2021 Sounds like a song that comes from a very real and heartfelt place. Art is just the conversation we have with ourselves until we meet someone who's been there before too; thanks for sharing yours. Keep it up brother. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted April 23, 2021 Share Posted April 23, 2021 I Liked It. Very good job on the keys and vocals. Loved the melody of the choruses. That was also a very creative ending .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted April 23, 2021 Share Posted April 23, 2021 This had an early 80s pop/light rock vibe to me - I liked it - especially they lyrics - well crafted. The mix sounds like you know what you're doing - nicely done. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted April 23, 2021 Share Posted April 23, 2021 Great sounding mix John! This is a lovely song with some very heart felt lyrics carried along by a great melody! Oh ya -- "very creative ending" indeed. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted April 24, 2021 Share Posted April 24, 2021 you are getting some very good mix ears, John. The bass and drums are perfect, the piano too. Maybe the strings jump out a bit forward in spots, but no harm really. the mix was bright yet full in the bottom - very cool! cheers, -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted April 25, 2021 Share Posted April 25, 2021 John . . . you're cookin' with gas with this one (as they say in Canada) . . . a really great production. Mixing and lyrics are extremely clear, and may I say just a great song ! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted April 26, 2021 Author Share Posted April 26, 2021 @Lynn Wilson, @jack c., @Ruralrocker2010, @mark skinner, @Douglas Kirby, @freddy j, @emeraldsoul, @noynekker Thank you all so much for listening and your feedback.? John B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted April 27, 2021 Share Posted April 27, 2021 I love your lyrics John. Inner rhyming and pacing of the words is so poetic. I can almost hear it as a hip hop song too (sorry). Beautiful song my friend. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted April 27, 2021 Share Posted April 27, 2021 cool song, very clean mix. great job? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted April 27, 2021 Share Posted April 27, 2021 Pleasant enough little ditty that sounds like a good balanced mix here on my event 20/20's 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted April 27, 2021 Author Share Posted April 27, 2021 (edited) @bjornpdx Thanks! See! Some of my stuff does rhyme. ? @Old Joad Glad to hear from you. Thanks! @Wookiee Thanks so much, Mr. Furrypaws for your feedback and being an extra set of "ears". Sometimes I do wonder what my stuff sounds like on other people's setups. Stay safe and healthy, all! ?John B Edited April 27, 2021 by Johnbee58 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted April 30, 2021 Share Posted April 30, 2021 Good mix and enjoyed the song Cool Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted May 1, 2021 Author Share Posted May 1, 2021 On 4/30/2021 at 7:21 AM, Bajan Blue said: Good mix and enjoyed the song Cool Nigel Thank you, Nigel! ? John B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted May 1, 2021 Share Posted May 1, 2021 I really like what your doing, John. Keep it up! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted May 2, 2021 Author Share Posted May 2, 2021 (edited) 14 hours ago, David Sprouse said: I really like what your doing, John. Keep it up! Thanks, David. ? John B Edited May 2, 2021 by Johnbee58 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted May 4, 2021 Share Posted May 4, 2021 Well done John! Singer/Songwriter introspection, one of your best I think. As always, I'm impressed with how you gave Trilian such a good workout, and EZKeyes as well on this one! Two ?'s up, and a "back field in motion" on that little drum ditty at the 4 minute mark! t Oh and the comment On 4/20/2021 at 6:37 AM, Johnbee58 said: Maybe you'll like it & maybe you won't Self deprecation is fine, we all do it, but I don't think it worked on this one, this is a good tune! All the best... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted May 4, 2021 Author Share Posted May 4, 2021 Thanks so much, Tom. I appreciate the comment. ? John B 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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