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Paul, I really like the song esp the storytelling! -Bjorn

Very engaging song and Still sounds great. Kind of reassuring that creative efforts can live on after you're gone. (The older I get the more I think about these things.) -Bjorn

Those things that are hard to put in words can be better said in music. Take care -Bjorn

Thanks Lynn. I appreciate the comment. Thanks Freddy. Yeah, the sun did come out but didn't help much. I think my visit coincided with a spell of bad weather. -Bjorn

Hi Freddy Very nice accompaniment track to this and I really like the transitions between sections. Well done. I think it's been shown that a lie told often enough becomes the truth. -Bjorn

Nicely done. I agree with the other comments about the voc being a bit too low. Didn't know what was going on in the story but I made up my own. I once helped a guy make a movie in public areas. Mostly went okay except for the airplanes, the screaming kids and people wanting to know what we were up to. So I can imagine what it was like making your vid. -Bjorn

Thanks Steve. I appreciate the comments. -Bjorn

Great lyrics! Totally enjoyed the listen. Usually you listen to a song and you settle in to the style after a few bars, but this one makes you wonder what's coming up next. Very well done. -Bjorn

Great song. Love the guitar! The overall sound gives me kind of a mystical vibe if that makes sense to anyone. -Bjorn Edit: I just noticed my comment is about the same as hidden symmetry's above. Great minds...

Very cool video. As well as the instrument I like the music scale you used which gives the song a kind of exotic touch. -Bjorn

Orkney and Shetland Islands trip I don't remember if I ever posted this 12 min video of my trip to the Orkney and Shetland Islands in 2013. I don't have anything else worthwhile to post so thought I'd dig into my old stuff. Thanks for watching/commenting. -Bjorn

I really like this song! Vocal stands out very well. I like all the extra bits in the background too. -Bjorn

Catchy tune and nicely arranged. You can always depend on Nigel to come up with a professional caliber production. -Bjorn

Sometimes less is more and the song certainly proves it. Elizabeth has a beautiful voice. Really stands out in the song. I recognized a couple of Daryl's trademark chord changes in there. Well done! -Bjorn

There's a lot going on in the music, all the different instruments interacting with each other developing the theme. Lot of hard work put into this and i think you did an excellent job! -Bjorn

"it is so sad to see how she is disappearing" Well said Wookie. The words brought a tear to my eye as did the music. Take care. -Bjorn

Beautiful song and well produced. Professional caliber as usual. I wasn't hearing any bass if there is one? Not sure if the falsetto works (just my opinion) Boy, that's one held note at the end. Wish you the best. -Bjorn

Glenn, sounds good. I like it. The 4 notes behind the lyrics "come on to me" have a nice hook that could be developed more. But idk they also sound a little familiar? -Bjorn

Great guitar work as usual. You do a lot of surfing there in Finland? -Bjorn

Very creative use of sound fx. You should add a little something in that last 30 sec of silence. -Bjorn

I always like the social commentaries in your lyrics and your voice is just right expressing them. There are a couple of timing issues and some of the lyrics weren't distinct enough to come across well, at least to my ears. But very promising overall. -Bjorn

The instruments sound good and the mix is good. Bit repetitive but I get that you're trying out vsts in a different genre than your usual. Always good to explore. -Bjorn

Very nice! I like the mix esp the bass that doesn't get buried under the other instruments. Great job. -Bjorn

Nigel, thanks. I uploaded a new version with more bass. KSband Yeah, I had a feeling the song was maybe too repetitive. Appreciate the comment.

Asato Might be better if you post the song somewhere where the listener doesn't have to have an account or post it on Bandlab where I think everyone here has an account. -Bjorn