That's why I said
The song is 5:45 long, its too long. But; its your tune, your production.
I'd put the harp solo after the first guitar solo, then verse, bridge verse, fade to "black"; maybe repeating "sneakin' up on the blues".
I mention "song is too long" frequently on the forum, and I get the same Artist's Perspective every time, "I like it like that!"
Its a great tune, much enjoyed, but you did ask for "opinions"; everyone's got "one". ?
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"When I get an actual record company breathing down my neck"
@Barry Seymour just serving as your Uncles Ahmet, Jerry, David, and Clive here Barry, its my job...
And I forgot to add, you are hardly just a "Poser", so the jig is decidedly NOT up!