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  1. Little White Pill I got the idea for the lyrics from a song by Gillian Welch called "My Morphine" I've always liked the song for its melody and for the not your usual love song subject. https://gillianwelch.bandcamp.com/track/my-morphine For my song I wanted to use the melody from Blueberry Hill but I couldn't hit the higher notes so the song evolved into something else. I haven't done a vocal in a while for obvious reasons. I used a lot of Melodyne which helped get me on pitch but it introduced some artifacts which I gave up on trying to fix. So the vocal isn't too good but it doesn't much matter. It was fun to do. Thanks for listening/comments. MusicLab RealGuitar Classic Kontakt piano Zebra strings ------------------------------------ I found my thrill in a little white pill it was love at first sight she made me feel all right ------------------------------- she smiled at me she said just follow me that's when I fell I fell under her spell ---------------------------------- such a beautiful romance you should have seen us dance swaying as the music played swirling the night away ------------------------------ gtr break ------------------------- something's gone wrong the thrill is gone not like it used to be she don't smile at me ----------------------- what can I do to make it like before she whispered in my ear Honey I need more -------------------------------- So I told a sad story the doctor felt sorry now life is worthwhile again she's smiling at me again ------------------------- gtr break -------------------------- something's gone wrong the thrill is gone not like it was before she don't smile any more ----------------------- what can I do to make it like before she whispered in my ear Honey I need more
  2. Very very nice. Liked it a lot. -Bjorn
  3. Promising start. Keep it up. -Bjorn
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    Sugar Crash

    Sounds good and sounds like you had a great time making the music. -Bjorn
  5. Very smooth and laid back. Great mix too. Everything is well placed and easy to pick out. -Bjorn
  6. Jack, Wookie, Steve - thank you!
  7. Today is Yesterday's Tomorrow Just an energetic electronic noodling kind of song with some movie dialog bits thrown in. Thanks for listening/commenting.
  8. Best cover of Crying I've heard, not only hitting those high notes but also expressing the emotions behind them. -Bjorn
  9. Wow, I think I like your version better than the original. Simply wonderful work, Ross. -Bjorn
  10. I was in a band called Missing Cat. Maybe you saw our posters? Ok maybe not a pun...
  11. Lot going on in this song and you handled it like a pro. Excellent -Bjorn
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    Modo

    Nice use (and control) of delay fx and I like how the piano fits in so well with the backing track. I really enjoyed this one. -Bjorn
  13. Mar, remarkable how close this sounds to a CSN song. No crits from me, just wanted to chime in and say how much I liked this. Love the guitar! -Bjorn
  14. Impressive array of synths and they're all synced up well. Just my opinion: The thumping drum is too dominant and repetitive but maybe that's the "house" genre signature (IDK. I don't keep up) There were some moments without the drum and right there I heard a nice background for playing improvisational keyboard stuff. Like I said, just my opinion and taste in music. -Bjorn
  15. Thanks for the comments and suggestions. Well I don't know why I put in the dialog stuff except it seemed like a good idea at the time. Gonna take it out. -Bjorn
  16. Sounds really good. Was the vocal track pretty clean after the extraction? Going beyond the techy stuff I thought the song itself was very good. Nice job. -Bjorn
  17. I really like the backing track. Simple but effective and plays off the vocal well. -Bjorn
  18. Very energetic and imaginative. Really liked it. -Bjorn
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    Late evening

    Best song I've heard from you Makke. Love how you bring out the emotions on every note. -Bjorn
  20. Very cinematic track. Would work very well as soundtrack to a nature program. The ending could be resolved a bit better but very nice overall. -Bjorn
  21. Hi Jeff, I'm impressed you were able to write a song while traveling and it sounds pretty good too. Very nice. -Bjorn
  22. I haven't been all that motivated lately - Health issues in the family. I do appreciate the comment, Steve. Thanks
  23. Steve - thanks for the comment. I do appreciate it Jack and Old Joad- thank you equality - thanks. It always surprises me how listeners have different takes on songs (and everything else in life) Noynekker - I've added bits of old movie dialog to my songs before - sometimes they work and other times not so much. No reason for the good manners subject . Just seemed like it might work.
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    A Night in July

    A Night in July Just a dreamy track about a warm night in July, sitting in the backyard viewing the Milky Way and wishing it could be like this all the time. Thanks for listening/commenting. -Bjorn
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