Wookiee

6 hours ago, yukohime said:

I believe music is the best tool to communicate with any person all over the world.

Not just the world but the universe in general it is the universal language.

8 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

~0:40  cool synth entrance with really catchy groove

Korg's ARP Odyssey provided that with some heavy tweaking thank you Bjorn for having a lending this your ears and making a comment.
 

7 hours ago, thegaltieribrothers said:

melodic dis-symmetry

Nothing quite like it Paul keeps me awake at night  thank you for having a listen and making a comment

It does seem to suffer with distortion, perhaps a remix starting with all the faders down and just bring them up until you get a more cohesive less compressed/distorted mix.

@thegaltieribrothers Thank you Paul yeah it sis sort of find and end quickly, more is decomposing though.

Not sure how how I missed this one, nice track, mix seem to be OK her @Lynn Wilson

20 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

your chops are as good

My chops were luverly, with a little rosemary and roast spuds what more could a Wookiee need.  Thanks for the ears and the kind words.
 

19 hours ago, Old Joad said:

The drums hooked me in

Thank you glad you enjoyed them and for listening to it all.

On 1/5/2021 at 7:48 PM, kurt soderquist said:

Cool groove sounds a little like stranger things soundtrack

Well I am a bit strange ? you you are most kind.

2 hours ago, Bajan Blue said:

Tangerine Dreamish

Another of those that has been an influence over the years Nigel, thanks for stopping by and listening and commenting.

Hope you and yours are safe and well.

On 1/5/2021 at 4:41 PM, Douglas Kirby said:

The mix sounded fine to my ears

Thank you sir you are most kind, there were more drones in this than anything else.

@Vincent Emmanuel The Bandlab website provides music from its contributors that can be playback on a Smart Phone

Is the guitar real of a VSTi?  Mix and playing wise it has a certain lose feel to it like Chicken Shack.

@Hidden Symmetry Thanks for the listen and comment your time and input is always appreciated. 
 

On 1/4/2021 at 8:43 PM, freddy j said:

A high five on Part 5

Thank you, it is building and going somewhere part 6 is buzzing around the back of the furry skull it just has not made it to the furry paws yet, patience has its virtues.

And yet again @Kevin Walsh I find myself listening to one of your tunes when dear Missy got me out of bed at 04:20 am for some unknow reason, but today she did not want to go back to bed so I have been up since silly o'clock today.

This does sound nice though  

I will admit it is not my thing, but I can comment on the  mix still but please do not take offence it is meant to be constructive.

For me on my Adam's the kick does not sound like it has any weight, there dose not appear to be anything in the mid frequencies and what is there sound thin at the top.

Have you mixed this on headphones or ear buds?

I would think with a few tweaks you could add what is missing back in to the mix.

7 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

Didn't give me vertigo

I add some control (Boz Digitals free Width plugin) to reduce the width of the tremolo effect on the Stage 73  V for some reason Arturia have made it really wide and there is no width control in the synth.  Thanks for your time and ears as always your input is appreciated. 
 

5 hours ago, noynekker said:

Pink Floyd groove

Mr Richard Wrights keyboard skills are an unconscious influence on me I think, I can frequently hear Mr Gilmour play his guitar over my stuff but the furry paws do not have the skills or chops to emulate him so I do not dare to try.  Thank you for listening and your kind words, part 5 is lurking somewhere on this forum.

16 hours ago, JEISONX said:

what do you mean by more developed?

As your song progresses it does not change, the lyrical content does but the actual back/supporting music does, not whilst I appreciate that this to some extent is the nature of the genre you can make subtle changes that will keep the interest of the listener and allow you to extended your song.  You can change the nature of the Bass by adding a few additional notes that would allow you to repeat a vocal passage without it sounding like you are just repeating the same thing.

Nice.

Not my thing but it sounded like it had been put together well, the mix was balanced, I agree with @jack c. needs to be longer and more developed.

Mix sound OK here @garybrun

Classic @freddy j vocal and groove, I like it, the double tracked vocal is a nice touch.  ?

I will say you could try and be more specific on your genre definition  ??

Funky little groove, I do wonder if your lead vocal is a little dry for the genre.  Nice guitar and EP cool stuff sounds nice here on the Adam's. 

Would I be right in detecting some 5th's in that opening chord progression, as ever nice easy on the ears Jazz from you @Hidden Symmetry.

17 hours ago, jack c. said:

chord spooky changes and accidentals and atmospheres

Nothing like a bit of discord to add an edge, thanks for listening and commenting you are most kind.

Nice track, shame it cuts off so abruptly at the end, mix sound nice here on the Adam's

@kurt soderquist you might find this useful for adding width, it is free.

@Douglas Kirby Nice tight mix, who does not like a squelchy synth.  Nice job sir.