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I'll save my "like" for the remix. I'll agree with Bapu ? (Can I say I Am in agreement with Bapu?) Plenty of good suggestions and seems like you're on it. Notice I've said nothing about the length? ? There's nothing that could be cut; well done Lynn! Boy howdy, me too same thing, on one right now. Turn your my pretty head and walk away... ? t

More good songwriting Bob. 72 releases on BandCamp, I'm impressed. t

Well done Bjorn! I needed a little soothing today, thank you! t

I couldn't have said it better! More Doug being Doug ? t

? David. So is the song title the ruins in the photo? t

Lofty goals there Neb. You've made it your own, that's for sure, so good on you there. Best of luck! tom

Ambient washy, that's a genre I'm not familiar with. But hey, you held me for 3 and 53, so good on ya. Now that 3:20ish mark, that's where the turmoil climaxed? I can see this as a soundtrack piece, maybe under the credits on the roll out? ? well done. t

I'm clapping, I'm clapping... Well done! t

Not at all what I expected. You knocked it out of the park! ? t

Interesting work, kind of fallen through the cracks, I guess it happens... tom

Non traditional Classical? Is that a genre? As always Jerry, great and very inspiring work! t

? Well done! t I do agree with Mark though, you could shorten it up a bit...

Really good mix. Not my genre but ? tom

Law of Unintended Consequences... ? ? t

Wow! The three of you really did a fine job here. Boy howdy, I get that. I think the mix is working... ? ? tom

I'd turn the vocal up a tad, my old ears are straining to catch the lyrics. Personally, I hate a "click". So I play along to a track. Slow, fast, straight four, shuffle; change it up. But that's just me... Andy is right though, play along to something that forces you to keep in time. Aimless noodling, and I've done lots of it, does Not improve your (my) timing. t

Bit of a "shaky" start (the link, not the tune). Missed the original mix, but I'll agree with the consensus on the final mix. ? t

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Freeze the track. What I see in your screenshot is a midi track. Until you freeze the track, you have no audio to export. HTH, Tom

Another nice piece of songwriting Bob. Actually caught myself singing along on "its a cold, cold, world". Can't give you a better compliment than that.. t I think @Bapu is right on both counts...

Hey, I enjoyed it, not in my "wheelhouse", but what the hay... t

Well I'm not sleeping! Soundtrack material, no doubt about it. ? t So that's the voices, eh? I like that, if I did this kind of music I'd have to take a close look at that...

Lee, I get it. There's a fine line when reviewing, its easy to say too much. That's why I always add "Your tune, your production". Most important thing for an artist; stay true to your convictions. I have a "Dead" story, but then I would be guilty of: Another time maybe, over three fingers of tequila? uhmm... I fight this all the time, I hear it in others work; another "fine" line we all walk. Structure is important in poetry and song writing, rhythm, meter, and message; but in what order? Depends... Again, Great Tune! t

Great stuff here Lee. Really like that B3, well done! Now for the but, its too long. Your tune, your production; I'd shorten it. In the bridge I'd add; for a second civil war. I think you need the extra syllables. Again, loved it; ? ?! t

A little Jesse Sampler. These are all excerpts from tunes we haven't heard Jesse? Sounds like there's an album lurking in there. ? ? ? ? (that's thumbs and big toes!) t little deeper in and starting to recognize some now...