Warp 1
In answer to your question yes Warp 2 is being composed as I publish this.
Thank you to all who listen for your time and your ears it is appreciated.
Synths used
Cherry Audio's Polymood
Arturia's Modular V (Moog), Jun-6 V OBXa V,
Captured in CbB, mixed in CbB using all stock Plugins except for Boz Digital +10dB Compressor Overloud's Breverb 2
and Polyverse Wider
Vocal sounds little thin here on the Adam's? In fact the whole mix feels like it has had the middle scooped out, sorry to say.
It sounds like you have worked hard on the songwriting and the playing sounds quite accomplished.
Very abrupt end.
I am not hearing a problem with the mix here, the vocal is fine and balanced against the support instruments.
Listening on my Adam A7x's driven by my Focusrite Pre 8 USB.
Mix is close but in my furry opinion the vox is to loud or upfront, it needs bring back by 2 or 3 dB along with some compression to level it out a little without losing too much of the dynamic..
If you are after the old school Rock and Roll sound then you are pretty much there with the instrumentation, if you want a more modern sound then as suggested above some punchy parallel compression on the drums and bass will add that depth.
As addition to John's comment, a search of this thread has at no point called you that sir.
Please peeps keep this civil, I would also remind suppliers that people are allowed to offer their own personal point of view, provided they are civil too.