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@emeraldsoul Anything that has the furry paws tapping by the end of bar 2 just has to cool, what a super groove you have in there, I can hear why @noynekker thinks he can hear a DX7 that EP has a classics DX sound. Nice all round Tom, sweet

Only listened to the first version but the drum timing does appear off. Are you using a drum sampler like Superior or XLN or is this real drums?

You asked for it @Paul Bush for a first attempt this is not bad, you have a reasonable tune and the vocal is good and the mix is close. Most here would agree there is no real fast track it is down to practice and learning what works. One of those lessons is that FX presets are only ever a starting point.

Just as you said @bjornpdx it has that old country vibe, sound swell captured here @Douglas Kirby vocal is nice and clear as are the other instruments.

@soundregion My thanks for your time and ears, part two is moving deeper in to the brain.

Is it Chrome warning you it cannot scan for viruses?

My thanks @bjornpdx for your comprehensive review, those random chords are not quite so random but I hear what you are saying, (the tears for dying stars/brain cells). Glad you enjoyed it.

Tom of Deering Amps has kindly offered to host this it can now be found here The Cosmic Brain Parts 1 & 2 I hope you enjoy it is now 14' 44" long.

Nice as ever Bat's, likewise with the best for your friend, it is hard when you see your friends struggle with addiction.

Thank you @batsbrew, it has become a bigger piece it is now 14' 44" long just tweaking the mix prior to releasing.

@Jesse Screed I could not have said it better, thank you.

Are you going to develop it further Keith? Classic 90's TV cop groove.

Nice smooth Jazz groove, like the brushes on the drum, what did you use? Thanks for sharing.

@Starise Nicely done sir, as an improvised piece it works well here, other then the drums being the same throughout not that that distracts from it.

Mix works here, not so much my things but it is well produced and played, thanks for sharing.

Mix works well here, has your polished sound worth a

Some interesting use of synths, thanks for sharing.

Sounds nice here on the Adam's, definitely caught the Rush and Neil vibe, thanks for sharing.

Very laid back groove, nice in its retro way.

@geeare1 My thanks and glad to hear you are enjoying it so far, it is close now though it is some 14 min's and 44 secs now. As I said above I will release it as a 24 bit Wave for download.

I suspect that it would be a very interesting evening to spend time with you @Jesse Screed and @David Sprouse a suitable moment of aural madness. Thank you for sharing guys.

Has that sort of mid 70's PI/Spy vibe to the groove.

@daryl1968 Thanks it is coming close to 14 minuets now, more instance of the Odyssey with tuned Arp's to enable playing chord sequences, two instances of the ARP 2600, oh and a surprise appearance from, wait for it, a Korg O5R/w hardware synth. It is pretty close now. When finished I will probably not post it to a streaming site but make it available as a 24 bit Wave download.

I enjoyed the groove of this.

Just the acoustics's sound not anything related to arrangements @batsbrew, and definitely all you.