Lather, rinse, repeat!
The "Jack Bruce" bass is growing on me; I must admit.
Now the bgvox is "supporting" the lead, much better.
I forget, you're using EZD?
If so "drop" a two or four bar kick and snare (don't "tap" it)
in the search field, it'll kick back a bunch of "patterns".
PM if you have issues with it, we'll get it sorted, you'll love it.
Much better my brother, and the song deserves it!
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