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Paul, your voice fits the genre well and production is good but I think it needs a stronger hook to stay with the listener for a while. I like the song but it would really stand out if you had bit more melodic element in there. This is probably more a matter of taste I suppose. Just trying to offer something constructive from one listener's take FWIW -Bjorn

I like the message Jesse -Bjorn

I like the story though I had trouble understanding some of the lyrics. Sounds like you used the same voc on three verses? There are some timing issues but IDK could be deliberate which is okay. Just a couple of nits but overall impression to my ear is positive. -Bjorn

Walt, holiday songs should be melodic and you have one here. Definitely fits the season. Great video too. -Bjorn

Boomin - yep, 8 tracks of Z3TA each one a different modified preset. Thanks for commenting Doug - I think I could get by with just Z3TA and U-He Zebra. I like Z's Thanks for commenting Steve - Thanks so much. Truly appreciate it. Hidden - Never heard of As Falls Wichita. Should be interesting to check them out. Thanks for commenting

Mix is very good Really like the off-the-wall humor Love the guitar accomp The world needs more upbeat songs like this Great job!

Kenny, I like the playing which is top notch as usual. I hope Milo appreciates his song. -Bjorn

I'm picturing chipmunks on a merry-go-round eating beans and cheese. ?

Lynn, I like the crease in time concept. Vocal is all your own and is also outstanding. There's a lot going on in the background and maybe bit too much? Rockin' guitar - I'm jealous. -Bjorn

Cool video Sounds like they're in the same room. Your better half has a terrific voice!

Wookie, really like the bass that starts 0:25 and the whirlies at 1:30 You always inspire me ... let's see, I have a vocoder around here somewhere (NI The Mouth?)

End of a Long Year I used only Z3TA+ in this project. I tried for some Vangelis pitch bends but not sure if they worked so well, but I like them. Thanks for listening and any comments.

I like the Celtic sound of this song. From the description I take it you're using real instruments? Very good performance. Kind of wanted more bass but I'm being too picky probably. Good job!

Kurt, I really like the crunchy guitar playing a middle east scale which isn't the instrument usually heard for that genre, but it works. There were a couple of phrases that could be varied some IMO but overall it sounds good and also a bit exotic.

I really like the vocal and the treatment you put on it. . Great mix, very full sound with maybe 3 or 4 instrument tracks? Overall very good job on this!

I like this very much. You guys work together very well ?

Kind of a 50s homage with the vocal harmonies and even a doo-wop in there. Nice melody and lyics and very clear vocal which I appreciate.

Well what else can I say? Just another great song, both in writing and performance. ?

I'm not seeing Sound Forge, Zynaptiq or the Boris fx at that link?

I picked up the Pigments sounds a couple months ago. Very good! Based on that I bought a couple Omnisphere sound sets today. Also impressive. Thanks again Larry.

Hits the emotions and it's melodic. Also very nice piano performance! Yeah, way better to fit the images to the score than vice versa. I like the Ctl+Z bit in the video. Wouldn't that be nice?

The lyrics have a lot of meaning for me. The style of your music (someone mentioned Steely Dan) is intricate and weaves in and out. Something I wouldn't attempt but you do it well. I enjoyed your muse inspired creation.

Well, I'll just second all the comments above. I think I've seen a couple of other videos of yours. Great video and it's pretty cool to see you guys playing.

Man, you are a crooner for sure. I don't have any suggestions, just compliments on a job well done.

Ah yes seems like I remember something about that the last time. Thanks!