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Everything posted by bjornpdx
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Kurt, I really like the crunchy guitar playing a middle east scale which isn't the instrument usually heard for that genre, but it works. There were a couple of phrases that could be varied some IMO but overall it sounds good and also a bit exotic.
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I really like the vocal and the treatment you put on it. . Great mix, very full sound with maybe 3 or 4 instrument tracks? Overall very good job on this!
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I like this very much. You guys work together very well ?
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Kind of a 50s homage with the vocal harmonies and even a doo-wop in there. Nice melody and lyics and very clear vocal which I appreciate.
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Well what else can I say? Just another great song, both in writing and performance. ?
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I'm not seeing Sound Forge, Zynaptiq or the Boris fx at that link?
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I picked up the Pigments sounds a couple months ago. Very good! Based on that I bought a couple Omnisphere sound sets today. Also impressive. Thanks again Larry.
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Hits the emotions and it's melodic. Also very nice piano performance! Yeah, way better to fit the images to the score than vice versa. I like the Ctl+Z bit in the video. Wouldn't that be nice?
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The lyrics have a lot of meaning for me. The style of your music (someone mentioned Steely Dan) is intricate and weaves in and out. Something I wouldn't attempt but you do it well. I enjoyed your muse inspired creation.
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Well, I'll just second all the comments above. I think I've seen a couple of other videos of yours. Great video and it's pretty cool to see you guys playing.
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Man, you are a crooner for sure. I don't have any suggestions, just compliments on a job well done.
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Ah yes seems like I remember something about that the last time. Thanks!
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I just downloaded v2.2 and it's 909,767KB file . Name of file is Scaler-2.2.0.pkg. I don't think I've ever seen a .pkg extension before so kinda leery clicking on it. v2.1 was the standard .exe file.
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Sounds good like electronics should and some melody too. Nice transition effects here and there too. On to part 3!
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I like the added synth which brought the song up a notch or two. Lyrics could be tightened up. Noticed the TH-U listed in a previous song of yours so I bought it (on sale). Way more than what I need but very cool in the right hands. I ain't there yet.
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Doug, I like your guitar melodic parts and fills and accompaniment bits. I always learn something from them. And I've always liked all the songs of yours I've heard over the years (years? I guess so). Just a suggestion though to maybe change the format a bit? Nothing at all wrong with what you're doing. Just wanted to suggest you could shake it up some.
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I listened thru headphones. I don't always trust my aging ears to make comments but anyway... Overall a very good production with an engaging melody. The strong lead voc is impressive but the lyrics seemed to get drowned out in places eg ~1:15 (however that could just be me.) -Bjorn
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Love the spacey sound - the sci-fi feel you mentioned. Not sure if the silent parts worked but that's ok. Good job.
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Made me tap my toes, made me smile, made me say hmmmm ?
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Nice orchestral piece with interweaving rhythmic bits. Not sure if I even noticed a guitar in there but no matter. Good job.
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Lost (explicit lyrics, somewhat I guess......)
bjornpdx replied to Critical Chameleon's topic in Songs
I read the lyrics first then wrote comments while listening. You set this up nicely with the "Critical Comedian" bit at the beginning. Really good cadence and rhyming (..concern me/...journey Nice!) I like the totally different style of the chorus. Words are going by too fast. Great outro. Made me think of Hotel California (he said across the generation chasm) I don't listen to this genre so I don't know what the usual topics are. Seems like you're in an early mid-life crisis or something. You put a lot of thought into this and you express it very well but it all would have been lost on me if I hadn't read the lyrics first. The words went by too fast to appreciate them (to me anyway). I really like how you laid out the song and the production is good, but might be better to somehow make it easier for the listener to get what you're saying. Depends on the audience I suppose. -
Jerry This really sets a wistful kind of mood. I like to actively listen the 2nd time around to hear all the different instruments coming in just when they're supposed to. Very good, as usual. -Bjorn
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noynekker Thanks so much for the kind words. Wookie, Doug, Kurt Thanks for listening and commenting Lynn I really appreciate your comments. Thank you. Jesse Thanks. I appreciate your comments. tom The 2 (or 9) in a scale always sounds like southern rock to me. Just gives me a homesick kind of feeling.
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Lee, I like the optimistic tone in your singing and I'm hoping the lyrics prove true real soon. Very good overall performance. The organ in there sounds really good. I don't trust my aging ears but is that a little glitch at 3:30 and maybe at 4:03? Great job.