Larry T.

Really well done. The fast section around 4:30 delivers. Nice lead guitar work????

Excellent. Music: everything fits together perfectly, great production all the way around. I can only imagine the amount of work it must have taken but the results are really nice. Video: the sepia tones (i guess that's what they are as I know next to nothing about photography) deliver????

Excellent. Music/vox: this one has all the bells and whistles. Well crafted, recorded, mixed, mastered. Video: really enjoyed seeing all the software settings, not crazy about the ladybugs though lol!!????

Enjoyed listening to them both. Well done!!????

I think you have a great basic piece of work. Minor EQ'ing and volume corrections would be nice imo. The guitars need a bit of volume decrease and the background vox should be more clear/distinct and a dB or so louder. The flow of the words and music is hypnotic and your vox delivers the goods. That being said the addition of fiddle, piano, cello, acoustic bass are all valid options, but it's your song so how it's realized is up to you. Good work!! ????

The basic structure is familiar musical territory I use myself but the motif's you insert are really tasteful, well constructed and well played. I'd consider writing additional music and add a couple of minutes????

Thanks Nigel????

Thanks Lynn????

Hi Mark. Excellent stuff. Your vox especially. This is one of my favorite pieces of music from the eighties (the DNA/Vega version) and the new AMK/Rooks version is pretty awesome as well????

Great work again Nigel. The only thing I missed is an instrumental break in the middle, say, a trumpet solo, but still a solid song????

Well crafted and produced. I can see and hear it working from a scoring perspective very well as the images and music work together to communicate a story. As a song I'd say to trim a couple minutes and tighten it all up????

Lots going on there, all extremely well done except (to my ears anyway): I'd eq the drums and cymbals up a half dB or so as they are really well programmed but not audible enough for the listener to hear a more distinct delivery of them. Your vox are really good????

Agree with all of above comments. This is a great piece of contemporary soul music. I would give the singer a break and add a trumpet and/or sax solo section in the middle????

Great intro. Great vox, delivers the goods. Music creates some awesome melodies, also delivers the goods. Mix sounds more than acceptable to me as the overall impact of the vox and music took my mind off the technicalities. Excellent???? p.s. i, too, am glad to see Wookiee back....good thoughts and good vibrations????

Wow, to my ears one of the best songs you've put on here. Definitely one of the best mixes you've done. Compositionally, rhythmically, vocally excellent. You have so much going on....imho, this song kind of crystalizes an aspect of what you've been working towards since I've been lucky enough to hear your work the last year or two. The bass on this is really creative, melody driven and not keeping to the root notes. The bass and drums are doing totally different things at times and it sounds great????

Thanks. Yes, that is me trying to find the right notes????

Thanks jack????

Thank You. The drums are three or four SI Drum loops I edited to fit the song????

Greetings all. Here's another one, Velocity (alternative instrumental). Comments, critiques and questions welcomed???? link: https://larryterrano.bandcamp.com/track/velocity DAW: Cakewalk by Bandlab pc: windows 10, i7-4770 CPU @ 3.40 GHz, 8GB ram, acoustic and electric guitars, harmonica, focusrite scarlett solo, arturia minilab mkII, arturia analog lab 5 lite, CbB effects reference speakers: M-Audio BX3

Good stuff. Agree when the drums arrive hyperdrive kicks in????

Hi Steve. Yes, I meant as a compliment, for a few seconds the chords sound a bit alike, happens to all of us now and then. Steve Wilson does incredible mixes. I do think besides having the technical resources ( great microphones, boards, software, equipment) and knowledge of how to use all of that he knows how to listen to a lot of different tracks and how to position them and allocate volume correctly for maximum clarity and effect. Thanks for Bandcamp listening, yes, instrumentals only at this time????

Very good production, playing, vox, mix. About 2 minutes too long for most of us but I'm sure your wife enjoys it and rightfully so????

Excellent????

Excellent work John. Agree with Lynn, your composing/arranging skills are superb????

Nice!! Agree with jack, make it longer????