JEISONX

I would like to start a thread where people in this community can share there Hip Hop, Trap, Lofi, or Experimental music that they create on Cakewalk.

Post Your work in the comments!!!

@Wookiee Thank you for listening. I appreciate the feed back. The language is English the part where im singing im just saying "Right wrong right wrong" &  just emotions sometimes is not words I guess I should write the lyrics on the description. 

Comment what yall think??? 

How can I improve my next mix?

23 hours ago, noynekker said:

So, the song is selling the car . . . it's got a very modern vibe to it, so it should appeal to the younger generation who might buy the car. You might turn the vocal efx down a bit to be able to interpret the lyrics, I can only pick up a few lines here and there, maybe that's the idea, it's more about the car ? You mention "explicit content", I'm not seeing / hearing any of that here, maybe because I can't interpret all the lyric content, who knows. The video is pretty good, and translates well for iPhone video, I do wonder about the volume being a bit low compared to other mixes I hear online, are you using a level of -14 LUFS ?

The hook says "I got a brother who only call me when he need sum, thought that for me you gon ride just like a nissan".  Thats why I used the car for the video. I mastered to -11 LUFS it was turned down 3 DBs by Youtube. I appreciate your input, Thank you. @noynekker

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@DeeringAmps Thank you for your input I really appreciate it & I know is not your genre but still id like to know what would you do differently to the vocals?? & I do get what you're saying with the bass line, the instrumental was premixed by someone else so I only  had the two track to work with. How could I add definition to the base line of the two track??

Thank you Jack!

Thoughts on the mix??

WARNING EXPLICIT LYRICS

@mark skinner Right on!  glad you noticed that lol

@Wookiee  I love this advise, Thank you!! I will definitely try to spice up the base in my next production. 

@marled Thank you! I will try this today😎

Dance with the devil- Immortal technique 

I have seen a pitch tool for clips before, but I was not able to apply it to vocals. It would be cool if we are able to just change the octave of clips without having to use an external plugin 

BRING BACK THE CAKEWALK LA2A!!! YOU CANT NEVER GO WRONG WITH LA2A

I appreciate your input @Wookiee ! By the way, what do you mean by more developed?

Thank you  for your input Jack,I got a questions. Songs needs to be longer? why?

Thoughts on this mix? 

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Listen to the lyrics & comment what you think about my brothers painting. 

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niceee thankjs

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