SPAK

Thanks for listening Bob. I am knocked out with your comments, so thanks for that. I am a songwriter first and there a some really great musicians here that could easily do a better job, (you included) so it's great to know someone enjoyed your work ... warts an'all 😏 Best Regards Steve

Oh dear I'm getting more stupid by the day 😜 Now I get it tut tut LOL Steve

Hi Olivier ... Pete here .. oh no ... just good old Steve Thanks for your time and input .. not sure what your listening through 'cause for me I don't hear it, still I love the idea of working with Kate ....but don't hold your breath Stay well my French friend 😉 Steve ( and I won't give up 🤘)

Seems a little swamped ... reverb/bass ? not sure but this concept is great to listen too. One thing to remember is it's Ok when live to hear the breathing between chorus lines but never on a recording because after 2 or 3 listens to the song it no longer sound like a ' live ' performance which, to me it sounds as though you've tried to achieve. Love the raw vocal and it works well but it's all a little too loose ... if you get my point Steve

Sent you a PM Steve

Many thanks for taking the time to listen Tom, I do take your point about the drum track ... in fact the whole song needs a kick up the proverbial to make it work. I often do the bgv's real time because it feels more 'real' although with this song I am using a Voice Live Touch I've hooked into my Daw ... basically it's the lazy gene, and instant gratification I blame ..... Thanks again for the compliment on the song though Best Regards Steve

For me I wouldn't change anything, great song and it's lucky I speak swacraply so I understood every word ... Great stuff Gary Steve

HaHa I thought it was too low in the mix so I pulled it up ...On the remix I will bring it down ...Thanks for your valid comment

Me too ...

I hear a bit of Marc Bolan vocal with a Kinks vibe .... great song (2nd Version gets my vote). Check out James & Tom's comments though 'cause it would improve the work overall.

Brave man ! Not to my taste as it's one of my all time greats but I see where your going with it, I just feel doing a cover should either copy the orig' or do it different with your own take on the hook ... Joe's power lead at the end of this song finishes it in spades and perhaps you could incorporate your interpretation. Spak

Just listened to it again .. forget the M8 bit ...still goin' around with that hook, still a B.Good song!

Absolutely the best you've done ( IMO ) Great synth work & composition I really didn't want this to end ! One small niggle though, and that is I felt the vocal was a little swamped with reverb which, for me, made the lyric somewhat hard to follow in places. This took me through a journey I enjoyed ...thanks for the post All the best Steve

Thanks guys, hope you don't mind me saying but I think your stuff has the same vibe ..somehow. I'm a lyrics sort'a'guy so your stuff appeals. Thanks for your comments & time Steve

Well I can't hear it ... you sure it's @ 0.58 ? ...Anyway no matter it's most probably due to my old ears getting worse LOL 👴 Thanks again Bjorn Steve

Your voice suits this song but I think it could do with M8, that said I'm going around singing it now ! so I suppose I'm hooked LOL Great stuff chaps Steve

No brainer No2 ...if I had to choose. But I think maybe I agree with Tom ...that said No2 would pass .... So no help here .... Steve

Thanks Paul I like this song too, but I had a lot of input from my peers regarding the 1st attempt and it really helped (On the old forum), I'm sure without the changes it would have had less impact. Best Regards Steve

Thankyou Bjorn ...Just got back from some work in London so a bit lagged at the moment ( Late nights & scotch + music ) but I will check that out, Thanks for listening and the comment Best Regards Steve

Thanks great compliment ! Best Regards Steve

Thanks for your time to comment SPAK

That's real sad mate, I have found now I'm the wrong end of 60 my voice has lost it's top end ...one day I guess I'll be in the same boat as yourself and I'm not looking forward to that. Take care and keep the faith (music) SPAK

Many thanks M8 means a lot coming from you Steve

Thankyou for the comments and trouble to make them ..gonna be difficult to get my head through the door though Best Regards Steve