Lee, I get it. There's a fine line when reviewing, its easy to say too much. That's why I always add "Your tune, your production".
Most important thing for an artist; stay true to your convictions.
I have a "Dead" story, but then I would be guilty of:
Another time maybe, over three fingers of tequila? uhmm...
I fight this all the time, I hear it in others work; another "fine" line we all walk.
Structure is important in poetry and song writing, rhythm, meter, and message; but in what order?
Depends...
Again, Great Tune!
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