daryl1968 Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 (edited) Hi folks This is a true colaboration on an original song written by Ed (Bapu) Kocol and Daryl (daryl1968) Greenway. Here is the list of participants Ed Kocol @Bapu - Bass, organ and Production/Mix/Master Lynn Wilson @Lynn Wilson- Guitars Daryl Greenway @daryl1968 - Keyboards and Vocals Hugo Ribeiro - Drums Lyrics below link Life Alert Written by Ed Kocol and Daryl Greenway featuring Lynn Wilson on Guitar and Hugo Ribeiro on Drums V1 I'm tired and worn I've been through the storm But I still have hope That one day I'll cope I'm tired and worn I've been hurt and torn But I still have faith That one day I'll be safe Prech You need to press the button, don't you wait Help is on the way, don't hesitate From the depths of despair you'll rise A life alert shining in your eyes Chorus I'm on life alert Waiting to be reborn I Need a new start I'm tired and worn V2 I'm tired and worn I've been lost and forlorn But I still have love And one day I'll rise above Prech Chorus Edited April 29 by daryl1968 8 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 Nice guitar work Lynn, interesting Vox Daryl, nice drumming Hugo. Nice bass Ed, though I found it a little to forward when Daryl was singing, just my two Triganic Pu's worth. As always reasonable production. 1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 Good song, nice work guys! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 1 hour ago, Wookiee said: Nice bass Ed, though I found it a little to forward when Daryl was singing, just my two Triganic Pu's worth. I'll take that up on the DJ remix Wookster. ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
craigb Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 Good job guys! Nice of you to pull Daryk back into the forum too. ? I can imagine the picture of the "band" that goes with this song having Ed wearing a t-shirt that says "More of ME in the mix!" ? 1 1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
57Gregy Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 Poppy, a little trippy, happy despite the lyrics. I like it! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted April 1 Share Posted April 1 I want to thank Daryl and Ed for asking me to join this project! When you have a song this good, it's easier to find inspiration. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted April 2 Share Posted April 2 Hi Guys Really like this and enjoyed the listen very much. Agree with Wookie re the bass being perhaps and only just of course, a little forward in the mix? Apart from that, thought this was great Cheers Nigel 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted April 2 Share Posted April 2 20 hours ago, craigb said: More of Am in the mix! Fixed that for ya! ? ‘s ? t 2 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted April 2 Share Posted April 2 muy bueno! Loves a good colab! Left a "like" and "comment" at SC. <broken record> Have you? </broken record>. Mix good here... t 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted April 2 Author Share Posted April 2 new mix just posted - bass volume reduced and a couple of things tidied up 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted April 2 Share Posted April 2 (edited) The lyrics are great and the vocals really deliver the message well! The arrangement also enhanced the "mood" of this song. Very nice and well done lads!!!!! Edited April 2 by freddy j 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted April 2 Share Posted April 2 34 minutes ago, daryl1968 said: and a couple of things tidied up Yes, I can be messy at times, so The Lovely Lady says. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted April 2 Share Posted April 2 (edited) Great collab guys! I really liked the breakdown after the killer lead break. Another thing that got my attention were the keyboards/organ. Nicely done .. mark Edited April 2 by mark skinner 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted April 3 Share Posted April 3 On 4/1/2024 at 3:05 PM, Bapu said: I'll take that up on the DJ remix Wookster. ? Bettera! Which DJ did you use? 1 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted April 3 Share Posted April 3 3 hours ago, Wookiee said: Which DJ did you use? Skrillix and Moby had a kid. They called the child Mobix who lent on a hand on this juan. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bats brew Posted April 3 Share Posted April 3 excellent tune! i like the voice, reminds me a bit of ty tabor from kings x nice dry capture. sounds like it was recorded in a closed coat closet. how did you mic this vocal track? i like the darker tone of the drums for this mix... the bass is still the loudest element, but i kinda like it that way. it's carrying the rhythm. great guitar tones, all around a great effort. good tune. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikfr Posted April 3 Share Posted April 3 Hi Daryl e.a. , good song , production, vocals and bonus points for the extended guitar solo ? Rik 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal Sorice Posted April 3 Share Posted April 3 Great tune - and cool guitar solo. My only comment would be that the drums are a bit "lost" - they don't seem present enough - but it could be the fault of my speakers. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted April 3 Share Posted April 3 @Lynn Wilson should have mentioned nicely played Lynn. t 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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