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Great story, is it about someone you know. If you let her go, she might very well return. Like the bass and the backing vox. I like it all really. well crafted and I can tell you put a lot of work into this. kudos!

Hello Jane, is this your first song posting in this forum? If so, great recording, and playing, and lyrics, and singing. I enjoyed that very much.

don't listen to them you are whole they pull for the soul https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14414639

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Do more stuff, please!

Hey, everything happens for a reason. Right? Glad to hear your back tickling the ivories, in tune

Radical!!!! Words can't express how freaking awesome this is!!!!! I don't know how you guys do it, but you do. Damn, just damn!

It means you are a music making machine! and you are it and I abdicate Keep going hip cat!

this is great what would happen if you slowed this down to half? that makes me think

see what most people fail to believe is that their is a guide to the inner way it's like an ancient hunting game to provide for their progeny of which we are hone on in all you wookiee is not spookiee

yes, very tiny jean_luc is major, he is a guiding star me, not so much

funny, this is how I feel at 3 am, but maybe that's mourning

could be yackey

the other will throw in the towel but so what

no she's not

Satan goes where ever, what ever

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14413658 the visigoths are raging

John, I love country music! Your songs are great because they tell a story. I feel like I'm at the Honky Tonk. Fence reminded me of Mellencamp, until you started crooning. Man, that was nice. Great work, I wish you all the best.

I LUV the Krupa drums!

Freddy J! I like the vocals out front like that. The backing vocals are cool. Did you do those too? As always, with your tunes, the story is there, and I love songs that tell a story. The only thing that threw me off a bit was the effect on the guitar. I like the effect, not sure what it is, but i have used something similar myself, but it seemed to mess with the timing at the beginning. Maybe try a different effect?

I counted six moves, 3 basic, 2 intermediate, and 1 that isn't in the Prescribed Moves for Internet Dance Scoring and Critique Officials Manual.

Tom, the mix is great. Very much enjoy the guitar You done did yourself well homes!

Well, at your age downsizing is inevitable.? You still have big hands though, keep track of those.