Jesse Screed

I'd rather be a hammer than a nail.

I'm familiar with Wilco, but not this tune. It is a very nice recording. Can you give a little more insight into how you recorded the vocals? I find the sound interesting and am curious as to your workflow. Thank you

really like the drums, and the bass at the beginning to me, this really kicks *****. really really kicks *****

This ^ It's all practice to me And nobody really gives a crap anyway Nor do most people really listen to what is going on inside the music That is perfectly understandable and I make no complaint The songs forum is a great place to hang out, it's like an elementary school playground, with a skewed perception But I get to take my turn like everyone else and even though I don't get carried off the field on my classmates shoulders I go home at the end of the day and can't wait to go back tomorrow I just like to play and am rather naive to other peoples perception there's always a few swell classmates who I get to see and that's enough for me because it's still a playground, and very few of us can monetize our swing at the ball anyway

Hello Jackson, this is a great conversation. If you will eventually replace your preproduction drum tracks with real drums then....

After reading all the other comments It makes me think of maggots eating decaying flesh. Slow and relentless. Did you know maggots can eat 50% of a dead body in seven days. The flies lay their eggs around the mouth, eyes, ears, and any orifice or wound, and then the babies do their work until they turn into flies. Yes, this is good, you should get some video of maggots and make this into a video.

I love it! Funky is always good. If you are asking for crtis, it sounds like you are holding back a bit on the vocals, like you are afraid someone will hear you, but that is just me, I just finished listening to some punk rock. Write some more!

Very nice. I don't know what else to say.

Reminds me of George Harrison! Very creative. Trust me, I get it.

Love the vocals! and the story. No need to freak out, what will be will be, and you can only control nothing. You're doing fine! Great song!

They are already here. I like the heavy sound, very forceful, like a tsunami.

Excellent!!! Had to look that up, I liked it. So true

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14417134

when you're already where you're supposed to be there's no reason to go anywhere else when you're already where you're supposed to be there's no reason to go anywhere else when you're already where you're supposed to be there's no reason to go anywhere else when you're already where you're supposed to be there's no reason to go anywhere else when you're already where you're supposed to be there's no reason to go anywhere else

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14416346 lyrics to this song pig tail sally she is a galley the blinders are on pigtail sally rally pig tail sally oh oh oh oh ohhhhh man that sally oh oh oh ohhhh pig tail sally she is a galley one leg and all don't need legs at all oh oh oh oh Sally blinders are on look somewhere towards Bali pig tail Sally

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Wow! Great album very nice guitar work everything is real nice everything If you hadn't advertised that it needs a total facelift I never would have noticed. one of the best I have heard anywhere

That's really nice, kind of wistful though. I do like the vocals a lot, and the lyrics are great. The playing, like all your music is very good.

The beginning was like a processional, and then it morphs into humankind searching, then at 2:18 it seems as if there is an answer but at 2 47 it swerves unknowingly, and then the fairy nymphs flutter from the heavens and bring the kiss of god. Nice David

Great story, is it about someone you know. If you let her go, she might very well return. Like the bass and the backing vox. I like it all really. well crafted and I can tell you put a lot of work into this. kudos!

Hello Jane, is this your first song posting in this forum? If so, great recording, and playing, and lyrics, and singing. I enjoyed that very much.

don't listen to them you are whole they pull for the soul https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14414639