The mix sounded fine to me -- I am assuming that you must have re-worked it. I love the sound of this song. Everything about the instrumentation further develops and complements the lyrics. Song flows and has a great chorus (hook) that I believe would make this very commercial. Perhaps the thing that I like best about this number is that it is not overstated in its presentation. The entire song draws one in with out flashy lead breaks, screeching and screaming, and vocal notes are not held for 20 minutes at top volume. BTW the background vocals really add to the song. The only suggestion that I would have is in agreement with some of the suggestions above --- perhaps a lead over the repeat of the intro chords might help. Anyway, very nice work!!