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Thanks Gary they are very profound words .... ATB Steve

I really like this .. If, .. can I add to the forum .... both vocals are excellent ... and I really mean that (FWIW), they can hold their own without much backing ..view this ... the male vocal is our Joe Cocker and your putting him with say Carol King .. think about that mix .. the backing is great but it needs ( to me ) a little more separation ..Joe sings and Carol responds ... hard I know .. but this is a bloody good song ... My bit over .. thanks for the post ? ATB Steve

Good song ... needs a remix ... ATB Steve

Love the picture of your words ... the rhythm very much 4/4 But it works ... thanks for the post .. and as you know I follow your stuff on S/C ATB Steve PLEASE Post the words ...

Sorry for my interpretation / comment ... your stuff blows me away,, and I see what you were trying to achieve with this work ... respect! ? In retrospect I think there is another message here that I may have missed ... but that is a craft in music impossible to say or use words to explain ... I wish you well Steve

JUST LOVE IT !!! I play this in my playroom when I'm fed up with writers block ... said before GREAT!

You should get an agent .. your voice is the best instrument you have ...

Love your voice ..so smooth .... Teegarden say's it all

Sorry my old friend .. this does not gel in my mind .. not something I feel is really up to anything but soundscape and various vid images .. I love the idea of the elderly man and dreaming of his life as it passes though his mind ... the girl on the beach, his love .. the little boy with his dad ..and various shots of life as he dreams .. but there seems to be little cohesion ... I love your work and it pains me to give crits but ... I feel you know me well enough to give an honest opinion .. but who am I to criticize ?? ATB Steve

Very enjoyable, carefully crafted.

Hi Lynn, Been waiting for you to update us as to what's new .. and. The overall mix IMO is really good, I was distracted by the excellent vid work .. what the hell are you using? the sinc is perfect and I think if I lived in the 60s ( I did by the way ... and the 50s for that matter ) I would have wondered if the devil actually helped you ... This works sums up your talent in song writing and vid work ... for me it comes in at 10 ! ATB Steve ?

Steve, what did you like better on the first mix? I split the screen in the studio and played both versions side by side ( not at the same time LOL ) taking each section from one and then comparing it with the other I think I prefer the 1st mix over the 2nd for quite a few reasons. The 'feel' is a little more 'in your face' as if your in the best chair in the night club.... this I my opinion is due to it having a bit more compression and the drums a little more, lets say crisp including the sax . the fills are a good addition and it's a strange thing as you say you fattened the bass a little in the 2nd V ?, .. . It's just a personal thing though as in both versions the mix is excellent with, have to say, little difference, so it's not a criticism of the second variation .. just that I would have mixed it with the original take as done ... Still a bloody good bit of work !! ATB Steve

Well you knocked everyone into touch with this bit of work .. only a few people here can produce such talent .... soo good .. one of my favs now .. just for the record I liked the first mix better .. Steve

I agree with Nigel.. really all of the comments .. a well thought out instro, but for me it lends itself to swimming with dolphins ... ( maybe I should put some water with LOL ) ? Anyway great work ! ATB Steve

Thanks Bapu, really got nostalgic looking at the old forum ... still feels like home to me ...I loved those days .....

NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK MATE ... All good here and worth the wait Steve

Well recorded and mixed ..

And no buzzing ... good work ... did you do all the other stuff like intonation when you finished dressing .. always good before going out mate ☺️ ATB Steve

And my good self

Very true Dean, and I let it go regarding EQ thinking I'd get away with it... but I wasn't counting on your ears ? .. should I put this up for Spot I will correct it .. thankyou for the observation and comments it means a lot ? All the best Steve

Thanks for your great comments Larry Steve

Much better ... sounds like Sting now LOL Excellent mix Love it loads Steve ??

I agree with the comments .. Wow what talent thanks for the post ,,,,, REALLY enjoyed this one ! Steve

Firstly IMO it's a really great song .. I think I could listen to your work all day long and still not have enough, you have a unique talent and although this is not your usual vibe , I think you nailed it .. it's got a bit of Peter Gabriel in there and so to take that as a crit I feel the vocal should be a lot more prominent ... great stuff mate ATB Steve (SRM)

....Me too ... But I really feel these words, very brave of you but the sentiment is something we are all struggling with .. good work, just wish the vid hadn't been pulled Steve