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Hey Freddy, I'm a little taken aback by this kinder and gentler version of Freddy -- I kept expecting some lyrical zingers. However, this was very enjoyable -- I like the way you did the hi-lo vocals -- very creative. And, I like the slightly out of left field guitar break -- you didn't go for the obvious lines there. Mix is clear and the arrangement is terrific--good work~~Allan.

Hey Mark, this was well done indeed-- I expected to hear Michael Franks start singing -- beautifully played and recorded and the mix is top-notch--great work~~Allan

Quite beautiful Bats -- your slide work was poetic -- the mix was perfect -- great work~~Allan

Cool demo -- just punch up that bass a bit will ya?~~Allan

Although I listen mostly to bebop style jazz, I do appreciate it when someone creates a piece as satisfying as this -- great arrangement, playing and mix. Kudos~~Allan

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Hey Douglas, very good mix on this -- clear as a bell and pleasing to hear -- I like your Squeeze-like harmonies ("Yeah...") -- good luck with this and your album~~Allan

Hey Douglas, glad you like the song -- thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan

Great sound on this tune Mark -- country radio would do well to play this~~Allan

Hey Harry, this is a cool track -- like the guitar tone -- and the mix is very good~~Allan Otherwise, the song is actually generic.

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Hey man, love that guitar tone (are you a Rory Gallagher fan?) -- very nicely played -- the overall mix and sound is very good -- spot-on vox -- thanks for making my toes tap~~Allan

Hey Paul -- you've got a terrific voice -- I like your phrasing and the sound of your voice. The arrangement got better as the song progressed -- like that tag a lot. This is a very good demo of a very good pop song -- nice work!~~Allan

I'd like to hear your song -- do you have a link instead of a download?

Very nice demo of your song -- mix and arrangement are top notch -- I hear a touch of Waylon in your voice which is very appealing -- good work~~Allan

Hey Douglas, wow those drums are crackin' in that intro - reverb sounds great -- but then during the song they lose some of the punch. To me, it sounds like the heavy use of reverb throughout the mix is making the overall sound a bit mushy. I like your sneering vox and the chord changes from verse to chorus. Oh, that rhyme of "annoyed" and "toy" -- good one.~~Allan

Hey Paul, this is a nice song -- catchy -- and a good demo of it but this ain't no dance song -- :)~~Allan

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Hey Rex, another terrific demo from you - the mix is very good -- I like your acoustic guitar playing: the rhythm is slightly unusual -- and, your vocal is spot-on: a warm resonate sound coupled with good phrasing. Good work~~Allan

Hey Douglas -- this is a good demo of your song -- vocal is riding the mix just right -- maybe drums could go up a tad tho--nice work~~Allan

Hey Rex, this is a terrific demo of your song -- vocal is very good as is the mix -- cool title too :) I enjoyed this. ~~Allan

Very nice listen -- good arrangement -- thanks for sharing.~~Allan

Hey Freddy -- this is another cool number -- I like those guitars cos they sound swampy -- and bless your heart for not rhyming Sally with Alley :) ~~Allan

Yeah, and they last a long time -- I've had mine for years and it gets a lot of use -- and oh yeah, I use the mic a lot too~~Allan.

Hey, I'm glad you like the song -- thanks for listening & commenting~~Allan.