Terrific demo of a terrific song Paul -- love your vox (esp. the immediacy and passion) -- lyrics are well done -- this is very good work in that you took chances in the writing and the performance and it really paid off -- Allan.
Hey Douglas, thanks for listening and those specific comments -- I agree with you about the drums so I remixed it -- thank you for your ears, mate! -- Allan.
“Society is invincible—to a certain degree. But your real life is your own, and nothing can touch it. There is no power on earth that can prevent your criticizing and despising mediocrity—nothing that can stop you retreating into splendour and beauty—into the thoughts and beliefs that make the real life—the real you.” ― E M Forster, Where Angels Fear to Tread
Hey Freddy, I close my eyes and listen to this and suddenly it's over -- I open my eyes and I'm shocked that I'm *not* sitting in some roadside joint -- that's very disorienting mate -- -- another good one from you -- Allan.
Hey thanks Douglas -- yeah, way back in the way back when I attended Acme College of Demo Knowledge, I majored in no-autotune...and the like...and minored in snappy snare sound. So, good catch on your part... :) --Allan.