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Hey Bob, thanks for those comments particularly that you dig the guitars -- real guitars are the thing right mate? -- some people try to pass off midi sounds, loops and such as if they're playing an actual guitar. Not gonna have that crap. And, it's not unusual that you'd notice guitars being the fantastic rock guitarist that you are. ~~Allan

Hey Freddy, thanks for listening and for those kind comments -- glad ya like the song. I'm looking forward to your next song post -- they're always enjoyable.~~Allan

Nice comment martin!

Much thanks mate -- glad ya like it.~~Allan

Yeah, mate, that's me on all the vox -- thanks for that heady RO comment. Oh yeah, electric guitar eq -- what a pain, roight?~~Allan

Hey there mate -- thanks for the generous comment~~Allan

I like this -- creative lyrics and an interesting arrangement. While this demo needs a bunch of tweaking you have something good to work with here. I'd like to hear this again when you tighten it up. Good work... ~~Allan

Hey Kloon, this is a terrific demo of your song -- good mix and arrangement -- instruments and vox are well placed. If you revisit the mix -- it seems to me that there's a lack of sparkle in the choruses -- for instance, the harmonies could be louder in the mix -- it could sound "bigger" or something. Good work~~Allan

Thank you for your nice comment~~Allan

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Hi Kenny, This is beautifully mixed -- I love those melancholy sounds and you performed everything with taste and wonderful tone (as usual for you). A fine piece of work, my friend. ~~Allan

I like your mix and the arrangement -- your choice of instruments is interesting and make for some tasty ear candy -- I also like your vocal approach and tone. ~~Allan

The mix on this is very good -- clear and spacious -- good stuff. Also, you delivered the lyric is an emotional tone that's quite effective. A very good listen mate~~Allan

Hey Doug, yeah, a cool 60s feel on this -- if you revisit the mix, perhaps take a listen to the eq -- some warmth could be added to the mix. ~~Allan

Hey there Freddy -- as I was listening to this two thoughts came to mind -- 1. I'm digging this and a tad hypnotized by the delivery and 2. your vocal reminds me of someone I like from the 60s -- the overall timbre and such -- NO, not McCartney! -- I can't think of who it is but I like it. As to the recording, there are timing issues in places where the feel isn't quite right . Also, I think that you could pan out some of the instruments to give the mix more space. I like that bass. I enjoyed this and wish you a Merry Christmas!~~Allan

Thank you, mate.

Hey macce, thanks for listening & commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan

Hey Tom, I'm pleased that the song resonated with you--thanks for your comments~~Allan

Hey Douglas, thanks for the kind comments mate -- I'm glad you like my demo.~~Allan

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Hey Freddy -- on the opening drumbeat I thought it was Rainy Day Women -- it got even better after that. Love that raunchy guitar tone. Drums could be up in the mix a bit mate (maybe cut back some reverb). As to be expected, I enjoyed this from you~~Allan.

Hey Bob, very very cool -- as usual~~ ~~Allan

Hey mate, thanks for listening and commenting.

Hey mate, good sounding mix and a very nice listen -- I enjoyed this~~Allan

Hey Old Joad -- happy you like the tune and that it made you feel happy to beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee